|Reviews for Shattered Dreams|
| shinigami109 chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
woot plz update soon!
| Trinity-33 chapter 3 . 11/13/2004
"The ocean waves made a metronome of rhythm, while the beach’s inhabitants made their visceral sounds."
My favorite line!
But this one's weird:
"The animals’ gaze were now fixated upon him now..."
However, it was an excellent chapter! Are you to ever continue?
| Trinity-33 chapter 2 . 10/31/2004
What? cliff! I have to leave too! Grr...well tonight then...I'll finish tonight!
Ah, I love Tidus!
| Trinity-33 chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
ooh...this is good! very very very good descriptions...especially the corpse melting into the sidewalk...however gory...
| Luis chapter 3 . 4/20/2003
PLease update this crossover story of yours very soon.
| NoOriginalThoughts chapter 3 . 2/15/2003
Oooh. You are mean. You shouldn't end things like that. It is so mean. Anyway, I like what you have written so far. It was pretty good the first time around, but it was better when I read it listening to Simple & Clean. You should continue on with what you have written, it is very well developed and very descriptive. You have a lot of potential with this story. I am going in circles mow. Well, I am looking foward to your next installment in this story. Good Luck!
| Chosen One chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
PLEEEEEEEASE UPDATE! This fic is really really really good! Please add more soon! I'm dying to know what happens!
| Bibie chapter 3 . 11/1/2002
Sorry it took sooo long time to review your story. I like it, and hope you soon update it since you haven't updated a long time ago...
*curious to see whether Yuna falls in love with Cloud*...
| The Dude chapter 3 . 9/30/2002
Great Story can't wait to find out what happens in CH. 4
| Evil-zukin chapter 3 . 9/21/2002
aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh please hurry and write the next chapter please
| RAxx chapter 3 . 8/21/2002
Liked the story so far. So where're he new chapters?
| Luis chapter 3 . 8/20/2002
Liked the story so far, but please update this story very soon.
| Trinity6 chapter 3 . 7/17/2002
yay... i updated!
Tell me... what did you think?
| toomuchconflict chapter 1 . 6/29/2002
Ooh, a little bloody...
The first chapter didn't have much yet (my crappy server won't let me view more than the first chapter...)
Looking forward to the next one though!
| Yo-Yo Man chapter 2 . 4/24/2002
I'm gonna die!