|Reviews for Midnight Sin|
| Karolsp chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Teen Edward is very naughty! Lol but I thought about that too... How Edward could get through all these kind of nights without an outlet... Loved your story!
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
| Fliberty chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
This is funny and hot. The image of his eyed set the scene nicely.
Surely Edward couldn't so restrained all of the time like Bella thinks ;-)
| JanetL chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Very nice lemon. I found it replying to a review on someone's favorites list. Its fun to see whose reading my stuff, plus there is often a good story I would have otherwise missed.
ANyhoo, you are so right about not being able to use certain words to describe Edward's "manhood" when writing a story about them. As a cannon girl I don't Bella would say them either.
Again, good one shot,
| AwesomeSauce76 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
This was really sexy! I just love it when Edward can't control himself!
| goldenmeadow chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I loved this.
So nice to see some canon...and yet your made it lusty!
You really caught the Twilight characters, and made them do the unmentionable without veering off course.
| Gingerandgreen chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
That was a great idea, and very sexy. :)
| Coleen561 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
You said this was a bit of a challenge for you, but I think you did a great job capturing Edward's canon "voice." I really enjoyed your one-shot and I gave it one of my three votes for the contest. I'm going to check out your other stories!
| MoJo40 - Ffaddward chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
Super hot :)
| MasenCullen chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Midnight Sun Edward and Bella? Oh yeah, I'm feeling it. I mean, crazy. spot on. them. I give this two thumbs up and I want SM to finish Midnight Sun already.
| Dantelover051386 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
That my friend was SPEC-FUCKIING-TACULAR! i loved it.
| tawelephant chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Poor stupid Edward. That was great! I always wished he would just give in and ravage her.
| bananafox chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
very hot and very edward. i think you nailed as far as staying in canon is concerned.
| SleepMyBella chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I enjoyed your story so much! You are a talented writer.
| insurgentdivergent23 chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
This was an awsome one shot (: absolutly brilliant
I kinda hope you could turn it into a mult-shot, or even a story haha (: