|Reviews for Sweet Surrender|
| SNAPE38 chapter 9 . 9/23/2011
HOW LONG WILL THE DRUM ROLL LAST:)
GREAT STORY SO FAR LIKE THE BUILD UP
SURPRISED WHEN HARRY AND RON LEFT BUT I LIKE IT
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE STORY WELL DONE SO FAR
| Phoenix Rebel chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
Wow...that was...it was just...wow...really emotional and really good! Yes things are moving! I'm with Professor Snape though...Harry and Ron can be dunderheads. And, Hermione is right to worry about them. How many times has she saved their collective butts? What will the boys do without her? *gasps*
| Fifinella chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
I just found your story today... and I LOVE it! I really appreciate your way of wiriting! It's great!
And the Idea of 're-writing' the 7th book is awesome! All above the fact that Snape's reputation is already re-established!
I can not wait to read more!
| sweet-tang-honney chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
| where she went chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
Good to see more scenes between them.
| georgesgurl117 chapter 9 . 8/20/2011
Lovely chapter! So happy to see this update, and can't wait to see another!
| Sic Vita Est chapter 8 . 7/19/2011
Loving this story! :)
| sweet-tang-honney chapter 8 . 7/12/2011
| Kermit 304 chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
That creepy couple at the train station... what is it again that they need to take, some sort of medicine? Hmmm... I believe you are dropping juicy hints all over the place. As for Harry and Ron, not only do I suspect that they know about the Horcruxes (and they are not telling Hermione for some reason... hmmm) but they are also looking at her as though she is some kind of ghost. Whatever they know about her is keeping them at a distance. They appear afraid to give her more knowledge than she already has yet they are protecting her from something. Is she dangerous in some way? Is she a danger to herself? And why do I have the feeling that the creepy couple have a connection to Hermione? Oh... you are being so very sneaky! This was a wonderfully entertaining chapter. I am anxious for the next one. Great job!
| Phoenix Rebel chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
This feels a bit like a game of Clue.
So is it Harry and Ron on a train with Polyjuice? *grins*
If not, I have no clue who they could be.
I can't believe Hermione wasn't bugging Harry all week about the conversation she partially overheard him having with Snape. How could she hold out? I'd be bugging him the first time we were alone! Heehee!
Snape needs to give it up. He's being far too much of a stuffed shirt with Hermione. He needs to bend a bit and not be such a brute and all moody and ignoring her when they are in his quarters. It's not her fault that Voldie's after her. She's stuck with Snape as much as he's stuck with her. *sighs*
Just a suggestion...I keep reading your comments that are after the chapter and thinking they pertain to the chapter above. Then when that doesn't make sense, I realize they are about the previous chapter...lol. If those comments were at the top, before the newly posted chapter, then there would be no confusion as to which chapter they were for. You can ignore this of course...just thought I'd mention it. Maybe I'm the only one that finds that confusing?
Thanks for another great chapter. With that evil cliffie, I'm now waiting on tenterhooks for that next one! ;-)
| Icelynne chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
Pretty awesome story! Looking forward to the rest of it:)
| MelodySwanMills chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
Loved this chapter!I wonder what's going on with Ron and Harry?So that was obviously them on the train, and who took the Polyjuice theory is that they left to go find the Horcruxes, but didn't want to take Hermione because they know Voldemort's after I right? are you going to start getting into a relationship with Hermione and Snape?That's the best part of the story! great chapter, as usual, and I look forward to reading the next one!;)
| Dopplegranger chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
Aww, you cheater! Leaving us on a cliff and then walking away and talking about something else? *Tosses tomatoes in your general direction*. I wouldn't really want to hit you, that could slow down the next chapter... I'm doing it mostly for sport, and to entertain myself until you update. *Tosses 'nother tomato*
Aww, Sev's being sweet!
So... who.. when did-
Who's on the train? Someone, on the run, with polyjuice! I gleaned that much, methinks, but *who*? And *WHY*? Someone from Hogwarts, obviously. Lizzie? Who... who?
Can't wait to read more! I promise you more yummies then *if* you're NICE to us. :D
| cytl101 chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
You know, I have no idea how Harry and Ron will be able to do anything without Hermione...find horcruxes? No way...
great job :D
| liidg chapter 8 . 7/11/2011
Brilliant as always! Thanks for the update can't wait for more!