|Reviews for Light and Dark|
| hellraiserFan123 chapter 12 . 12/2/2015
Nice, my only complaint is for your spelling and grammar.. it needs revising.. and also you are trying far too hard to emulate other writers, you need to relax into your own style of writing, but other than that this is perfect.. very sad though, and romantic.. and it's interesting seeing this side of pinhead who is in love, and with a dead woman, and it's causing him pain.. But.. How could you kill kristy? D':
loving the plot, enjoying the story.. and I adore the ocs, especially this Xivine fellow, he sounds utterly.. divine (I'm guessing it rhymes with divine).. xD and the hell kids are adorable.. I think I'd adopt little Benjamin-Elliot in a flash.. xD
eagerly waiting for a long overdue update..
| L.J-1983 chapter 12 . 12/2/2012
Well, at long last I am free - for the moment - to review. ;D What can I say? Poor BEN! :'() Such a shame. I see he's starting to become in-tuned to his demonic powers. Awesome. Can't wait to see what happens after this, and if this will be the defining moment when Pinhead saves his little son. :'3 And the plot thickens with Ethan. He knew Trevor, which I knew - but gosh. Those two together...pfft. And Kirsty's not a whore, Ethan! Grrrr! Damn you! :( And Hannah is explored too. Horray! She's such a sweetypie. Leita's warning her about...Xivine? :0 Oh gosh. And yay! Ezra's making her first appearance. Wooopie! I like how you've introduced her with the inhumanely bright blue eyes and her petite frame. Good job. Can't wait to see how you write her in the next chapter. :) I also hope there'll be some more Pinny centric stuff too. :D And...perhaps more Pinsty flashbacks. ;)
Alright, great chapter. Wonderful as usual. Can't wait for more. I'll be replying to your PM later, if I can. Good job again, hope there's another update soon. :)
| Kitty chapter 11 . 10/22/2012
Awesome job...the whole story totally locked me in...looking forward to the next chapter :-)
| Addictedtragedy chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Ahh need more chapters! :)
| OMAC001 chapter 11 . 5/11/2012
I am loving this story. Hope you update soon
| L.J-1983 chapter 11 . 4/30/2012
Izzy! Finally, I am able to review. :D Hun, what can I say? This was a lovely chapter, with little Aurora finally finding out who her real, birth mother was. It was beautifully written and very emotional. I nearly shed a tear. And oh yes, Kirsty did indeed possess such unimaginable beauty. Your mother could have indeed been a Princess, Aurora. ;) That was so cute, when Aurora asked whether her mother had been a Princess. *gushes* So sweet. But oh gosh, Aurora thinks that her real dad - aka Pinhead - killed her real mommy? :0 Oh no, he didn't Aurora! Gah! Oh I hope she finds this out soon. :( And I hope to see some more soon of Aurora finding out about her real mother, like seeing some pics of her. I bet that will be emotional too. :/
And I can't wait to see Ben and Pinhead's centric chapter soon. ;D Especially when - grrrr - Ethan gets his ass kicked. LOL.
The part with Feline was beautifully written too. Poor Feline. And her love scene with CD was wonderful. Again you wrote a beautiful love scene. Hope to see some more Pinsty ones in future though. :D
Anyways, great chapter Isabella! Wonderful! Really loved it. Can't wait for the next part. And hey, I thought I was the worst f*cking author ever for such slow updating. Oh well. *shrugs* Take care, and great job again. Thanks for the reviews on my stories btw. Talk to you later. Laura xx
| Crystal chapter 10 . 10/26/2011
I wonder when you are also going to mention the daughter?
What would Xipi Totec's reaction be to learn that he actually has twins, a boy and girl?
| L.J-1983 chapter 10 . 10/26/2011
Ah, the infamous Feline shows up. The plot is thickening. D'awwwwww, Pinhead explaining of how he and Kirsty made love several times, and including one special time there in the Labyrinth. Well, correct me if I'm wrong; but isn't that the time when, you know, she gets pregnant? LOL. But yeah, loved the flashback with Kirsty entranced by Hell and bonding with Pinhead. I can't wait to see more. Will we see more of their bonding? I hope so. And oh gotta feel sorry for Feline there, but she is a right b*tch. LOL. Oh well, great chapter. Beautifully written. Can't wait for more. And I can't wait for sweet ickle Ben to finally meet his father and for Ethan...grrrrr...to have revenge thrown upon him. LOL. Take care, Laura xx
| Crystal chapter 9 . 10/25/2011
Can't wait for more reactions of surprise, shock, etc!
| L.J-1983 chapter 9 . 10/20/2011
Hey Izzy. Couldn't sleep so I thought I'd come online and read this. Wow hun, this was so beautiful and wonderfully written. How could you say it wasn't? Honestly, I could feel the passion and intensity from their...erm...encounter, but at the same time it was written in excellent taste. For the first time writing a lemon scene, you did a great job, better than I could have ever done. You make me feel so stupid in comparison to your superb writing skills. Well done! I thoroughly enjoyed it, and my heart broke for Pinny in the beginning there, when he finally admitted that he loved Kirsty. Awwww. Overall, great chapter, what more can I say? Well its official; you put my work to shame, and you're just a much better writer than me. If only I could concentrate better. Sigh. Anyways, can't wait for the next part. I'm guessing its the reaction to the Gash and maybe some more sweet little flashbacks? Can't wait. Take care now, and give yourself a pat on the back, you did well, and you deserve the praise. Stop putting yourself down. Oh and nice touch their with the hands. Glad I could help. And me infamous? Ha, no hun. I believe you have took that title now. Great job! Laura xxx
| The Angel of Thursday chapter 8 . 10/9/2011
I love it! Please continue!
| Crystal chapter 8 . 9/23/2011
Double check this chapter; you got some miss spelled words that you may need to fix. But all in all; GREAT STORY so fad!
Update real soon! :)
| L.J-1983 chapter 8 . 9/22/2011
Wow, hun. This was great. Wonderful to see an update. It wasn't that short. I enjoyed it. Aww, poor Aurora. I can't begin to understand how confusing it must be for her now knowing she has another set of parents out there somewhere, and that the people who brought her up were never of her blood. But she was right to conclude she still loved them and they were the ones who brought her up. I can't wait to see her reaction to her real biological father when they meet finally. And awww, sweet little Ben. I feel so horribly for him. I hope Ethan (grrr) gets whats coming to him. And awww its so cute the way the twins met. I loved that. Let's hope it won't be long before they meet. Excellent work again hun. So wonderful to see a chapter for this. Keep it up. And wow I can't wait to see Angelique's reaction to the discovery of Pinhead's offspring with Kirsty Cotton in the last chapter. Hehe. I detect a Princess Biatch screeching fit. Hee hee. Take care now. Much love, as always, Laura xx
| maddie chapter 7 . 9/2/2011
this is a great story so far! :) so cute and sad i love the twins i really hope u update soon and maybe see some flashbacks into how kristy and pinhead fell in love ;) can't wait for more!
| L.J-1983 chapter 7 . 7/26/2011
Wow, that was so wonderful, beautifully written. Very informative. Where do you get your ideas from? Hun, I must confess, you say you're envious of my writing, but why? I should be envious of yours! You're so talented. Keep it up. The plot is thickening. Anyhoos, damn that Angelique for breaking Kirsty's heart. How could she do that? Poor Kirsty. Anyways, can't wait for more. Take care, Laura xxx