Reviews for Dark Office
HumpbackWhales08 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Loved your dialogue between Roy and Riza. It was very touching and sweet. I also loved your description of Roy sitting alone in his darkened office. I could just picture him with the way you described it. My only suggestion would be to give it another proofread. Maybe try reading it aloud. That helps me to catch a lot of my grammar mistakes! :)
Triplet Alchemist chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
amazing absolutely amazing