Reviews for Jack, Jill and a Foosball Table
rubiesymusica chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Very nice!
Qunine chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Lol funny as hell!
meadow11 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
wow - that was super hot and sweet at the same time! loved it!
my2galspal chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
What a fun little o/s. I'm not gonna lie, you gave some pretty darn hawt visuals in here along with the funny. Something about Edward hovering over Bella but not touching...*fans self*...yeah, that was good.

Thanks for sharing your writing.
Liz Ben chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
thank you for this yummy story! so cute, and so authentic!
MarLea Pie chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Oh wow! Great title - and the story?

Ungh.

Damn hot. Like really, super hot.

xo

mlp
Edward-Jacob4ever01 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
CAN U CONTINUE PLS! HAT WOULD BE A VERY COOL LONG TORY PLS!

YOUR BIGGEST FAN EVER!
rubell chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
that was so friggin awesome!
shde chapter 1 . 12/24/2011
YOU ARE A MASTER!

after reading the naughty elf i'm just reading all of your stories and must leave recognition of your brilliance.
Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Super HOT! I especially loved the ending. It made me laugh. Thanks!
tsmacker chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
That was hilarious. I can't believe you changed the name. The orginal was so much better. And your 22 with a 14 and 15 year old. You are good. I'm 29 with a 15 and 17 year old. Go figure. My 15 year old daughter is Team Jacob. I'm thinking about writing her out of my will. I will give him credit though that he does look good without a shirt, but the unnaturally white teeth kill me.
scrosby66 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Floved it! Thanks for writing!
velvetheels chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Freakin' loved it. Anything that has Edward jackin' it is tops in my book. So hot!

Thanks.
xXToxicTearsXx chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Honestly, I would like to see this story continue on... It would be an odd start to a longer story but it would be awesome to read on and see what happens with B&E's relationship :D
angel04une chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
That was sooo good! Maybe u turn it into a short story? *wink wink *
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