Very nice

This was a fascinating and refreshing read, and Joanna's outrage and disgust toward memory altering spells was pretty damn satisfying. I was admittedly puzzled though, that she didn't seem...upset? Seeing Alan die, or experience (express?) any sense of loss about her brother. Nor the lack of fear she seemed to have while dealing with death eaters. I was also confused about the lack of legal loopholes-dont muggle parents know they have magical kids? siblings too? they're not automatically obliviated. Why Joanna? Anyway, still a very interesting story and the intersection between muggle handling by the ministry was excellent, really glad I found this fic by recommendation

This entire story embodies the horror of the wizarding world's over-reluance on that one spell, and it really IS mind rape! *shudder*

Just obliviate Fudge! Problem gone!

Genuinely interesting and different story. Couldn't guess where it was going. Thank you.

Thank you for writing this. I was looking for stories about Muggleborns who plan their exit from the Wizarding world when they realize that if offers little to nothing to them,

I am sure that the Ministry of Magic is responsible for destroying a lot of lives, just as they did with the Stillwells and others.

"Baelorfan"

Wow I really did not see that ending coming. I am very satisfied with the story. There was cool new magic, mystery, and the canon characters weren't wildly OC. Great job.

This is great! Just one question though... As Alan's sister, shouldn't Joanna know about the Wizarding World anyway? Her parents too.

That was amazing. You perfectly described how someone would react to the Memory Charm and pointed out how carelessly it was used. It was a terrible thing for the Muggle's families.

Well, that was horrifying and brilliantly written. Good deconstruction of the issues with just Obliviating people all the time, especially combined with utter ignorance. Excellent fic!

A very well written oneshot that really dives in and explores just how big a problem memory modifying spells can be.

This was really great!

Good story.

I lost it after you stopped mentioning the OC.

Absolutely marvelous work, and brilliant writing! I love muggle stories.