Reviews for Mute
BrilliantPurple chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
Very good story. I did though skip all the torture going on in the beginning to the point in which she was rescued. I liked it very much though.
Runefarmer816 chapter 2 . 7/28/2015
You hear that? Yes, that sound. It's the sound of my heart being twisted and pounded in ways that it was never meant to. The cringing, cracking, shattering sort of feelings that leaves your heart in broken little chunks of brittle meat bits. Bouncing around in my rib cage with each word on the page...
Book Of Kells chapter 3 . 2/14/2015
Sorry, forgot that you need spaces...
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BookOfKells chapter 2 . 2/7/2015
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Now that I have read this I feel like you are the only one capable of filling such a thing with such a level of dignity, poise, brutality, as you exhibited here. Def. Going on my rec list. :-)
RogueMetamorph chapter 3 . 11/26/2014
Beautiful. This story, man! It sent me to the corner to cry and then pulled me out to smile at how happy I was. This was an amazing story and I look forward to not only read others that you've written, but to reread this over and over again. This was amazing. Great job.
RogueMetamorph chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
Oh my... whoa. The pain and emotions in this fanfic belong more rightly in a book. This is amazing and moving and entirely gripping. It HURTS! When she hurts, I hurt.

This is the third story I've read of yours and each has been more amazing than the last in it's own right. How?! Please writing these unless you plan to take a break to write your own stuff... and in that case send me your name and your rough drafts. They would be amazing!
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This. Is. Amazing.

worldsapart chapter 3 . 7/27/2014
This was disturbing, intense, and lovely. Bravo.
Julie5 chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
Holy effing ess that was flawless and amazing and astounding and unexpected. Bravo!
Akyesein chapter 3 . 6/11/2014
This story is beautifully done. I love the relationship your Hawke has with Fenris, the pacing is wonderful, and I simply have to say that your writing style here is spectacular in how you make the words sing. Overall, amazing.
JessLeigh214 chapter 3 . 1/14/2014
Be still my heart. This was utterly beautiful from start to finish and I will blame you my fabulous writing friend for my failing test grade tomorrow. ;)
CaptainRocket chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Great story. Very graphic and touching at the same time.

Thank you for sharing.
Shadowhawke chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
This was awful and dark and lovely. Thanks for sharing.
HobbitMom chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
What a great story. I have to admit I cried quite a bit while reading.
Nia Carter chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
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