Reviews for Out of Breath
Guest chapter 14 . 8/20/2015
Love this story!
Future Forensic chapter 14 . 1/4/2014
Queen Apolline chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
Wait, who won?
cherryorpeach chapter 14 . 9/20/2013
Who?! Find who?!

Yellow Eyes?! Ahhhh, I'm gonna go read the third one now.
sons-of-anarchy-rocks chapter 14 . 1/11/2013
really great!
nyx'godness chapter 9 . 9/7/2012
This chap was very touching.
Zera Rask chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
Okay first off I love this story and I applaud you for creating a successful crossover and a wonderful OC. But I'm afraid I was hopelessly confused about the whole Sam is a girl thing. Are we talking about Sam Sam? And if we are then how did Ami know him? Again I love your story, I just need help understanding this one part. Thanks.
LucidKren chapter 14 . 1/17/2012
My head is spinning. I really want to know what that ending was about... Was that...a reference to Yellow Eyes? So strange!

[moseys off to read the next one]
cocoa85715 chapter 14 . 12/12/2011
...John is a JERK! Bleh, I didn't even like John in the first place. :P
cocoa85715 chapter 13 . 12/12/2011
"Two guns roared as Hotch moved." I almost gasped out loud when I read that sentence. Then I read the next one and felt better. :P
Ghostwriter chapter 14 . 12/12/2011
Awesome. Hope to see more of this reality. Catch ya on the flip side.
cocoa85715 chapter 12 . 12/7/2011
Huh. I thought JJ would be creeped out by the trick shoulder thing. :P
Ghostwriter chapter 12 . 12/7/2011
Awesome job. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
cocoa85715 chapter 11 . 11/28/2011
Hmm, well Hotch seems to be doing his best to ignore Anna.
Ghostwriter chapter 11 . 11/27/2011
Hey, good to see you back. Oh, I HATE when characters won't cooperate. Hopefully he won't give you any further trouble. Keep up the great work. Catch ya on the flip side.
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