Reviews for Naruto: Nine and Seven
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7
Gotta tell ya I fuckin hate jiraiya
ivanganev1992 chapter 12 . 5/8
Ch 12

Poor Hinata. One of the most purest compassionate soul as Naruto . But unfortunately she is very timid . Kind of reminding me of HTTYD Fishlegs.

Got to sleep.
ivanganev1992 chapter 11 . 5/8
Ch11

Orochimaru probably died 5 or 3 times incapatatated 3 times few clay clones and almost truly died and left poisoned after that devastation.
So weak than 2 more deaths and shed skins could really eliminate Orochimaru . Well that is all for now.
ivanganev1992 chapter 10 . 5/8
Ch 10

I think yes they should. You know what are the enemies so to equal the chances.

Second that separation was not pleasant.

Third Sai should relearn the natural emotions. And just block most of them only in battle.
ivanganev1992 chapter 9 . 5/8
Ch 9

That kind of power of detonated Big Razengan Sage mode by Jiraya is equal to " PRETTY BEAM OF DESTRUCTION weak version"

The Pretty Beam is basically a lot of chakra turned into chakra bubbles into big concentrated big form of chakra compressed to chakra pill which is swallowed and launched back as Beam of chakra annihilating one forth of the mountain's edge. And advanced version I wouldn't image it .

The Pretty Beam could probably annihilate a army of hundreds or thousands heavy armored people and maybe hundreds or thousands Modern stainless steel Tanks.
ivanganev1992 chapter 8 . 5/8
Ch 8

Sasory could replace the severed hand with pupet hand as improved prosthesis.

But in other hand (pun in deed) Deidara is too much crazy and crippled will be less dangerous .
ivanganev1992 chapter 6 . 5/7
Ch 6

First maybe next time Jiraya Pervy sage / Ero. Senin/sage might be the ball and Naruto and Fu be the batters with their water swords.

Naruto used Jiraya as a ball and Naruto is the pitcher but as batter it would be even worse.

And Kakuzu and the Red clouds or roses worshipers of their death God appeared.
videogamesAIHO Z chapter 18 . 4/11
secondo me hai fatto naruto e fuu molto forti, e questo mi piace, con jiraya naruto nell'originale ha imparato in 2 anni solo un rasengan diverso, mentre qui hai gestito la cosa meglio di kishimoto
videogamesAIHO Z chapter 6 . 3/26
la parte romantica era molto bella, hai usato cosi bene jiraya con le sue stramberie che mi viene il dubbio che tu sia davvero kishimoto
Guest chapter 8 . 3/25
Time line plot holes riddled in chapter 8
videogamesAIHO Z chapter 4 . 3/24
questa fiction รจ molto bella, ho sempre voluto una storia in cui fuu incontrasse naruto e si divertivano insieme
Crusade chapter 11 . 1/8
Personally i hate it when i have to read about naruto using the kyuubis chakra to win any fight...
Was really looking forward to naruto fighting orochimaru without it, maybe not killing him but atleast forcing him to retreat...
Crusade chapter 7 . 1/7
And considering he beat an elite jonin with strategy and strenth and not just going all in seems to be a pretty good reason for a full promotion to jonin...
Crusade chapter 7 . 1/7
Great story man, its just awesome, though a little confused as to why naruto and fu need more expirience to become jonin when they probably have more or the same as neji and he was promoted...
BlackDragonShinigami chapter 18 . 11/10/2015
I thought it was amazing
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