Reviews for Pain, Betrayal and Happiness
Femalefan chapter 3 . 8/23/2015
Not bad though there are a few spelling errors like "hoddie" is supposed to be hoodie and "betting" is meant to be beating. You should get a beta or a new one if you already have a beta reader.
Spelling and grammar errors distract from the story.
Lizzybear54 chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
Please update soon! I gotta know what happens next! :D

Lizzy
Team Major Whitlock chapter 4 . 4/8/2013
I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for you to update. Just let me know in a PM if you need any help with ideas, no matter how big or small I'll do my best to help you. Summer xx
MandyBurke76 chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
please update soon
Guest chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
please continue
lord print chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
This story is very good however, I think if you stop adding in things as they happened in the book like umbrige making a speech it could be great.i mean most people already know what happened in the books we're looking for something original. Not trying to offend you or anything just some thoughts. Can't wait to see we're you go from here.
Melikalilly chapter 4 . 5/23/2012
i like this story
HeartsDragon chapter 4 . 5/10/2012
Interesting story so far. Can't wait to see where it will go from here! :)

Please update soon!
LadyKnight0207 chapter 4 . 4/24/2012
This is good. Poor Harry he is going to have one hell of a morning. Please update soon.
Tearful Shadows chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
Loved it. Please update soon
c0da chapter 4 . 4/22/2012
I NEED MOOOORRREEEE!
xSingleXdrarryXShipper2x chapter 4 . 4/21/2012
i really like this keep writing cant wait for the next chapter:)
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 4 . 4/20/2012
oh wow damn that was poor harry i love the luna hermione relationship though it was great
gsferal chapter 3 . 3/24/2012
I hope you will continue this story.
sm1982 chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
Well written.

Keep up the good work.

Please update soon.

SM
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