|Reviews for GUN Kitty|
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/16
I have an idea for what will happen do Dudley. Sometime later, he receives an mysterious letter that from an unknown individual who offers to help the former TUFF agent. the result however is a high cost: Genetics. If Dudley wants to fight against Steeltrap, he would need to give up something. In this, he becomes a little more feral, since all dogs a related to wolves, he could end up a little more wolf-like. And because of this change, his personality is different. How Kitty would react to a changed Dudley would be very interesting. Please keep this idea in mind.
| Callum chapter 19 . 3/10/2013
bloody cliffhangers :) love it
#1 fav FF
#3 fav the world i read a lot so don't be annoyed
| Callum chapter 19 . 3/3/2013
I am at the point with Tails saying that he loves Kitty to her. what the hell is going on this can't be right pls tell me dis isn't true pls
| Callum chapter 18 . 2/24/2013
that was unbelievable you are not just in my top 3 authors on Fanfiction you are easily in the top 5 of all time this chapter nearly made me cry being honest. pls send this to SEGA and NICK it is just amazing. I didn't expect the thing with Steeltrap was very surprising. well final chapter thank God you have the sequel up
WI Mole hadn't managed to intercept to message, Kitty went a different way, Amy died (I know a bit mean), Kitty had wrote a letter back to Dudley after getting the fake one or she personally wanted to tell him what she thought of him and T.U.F.F and maybe helped him with Steeltrap or got there after or before it all happened.
Keep up the great work
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/20/2013
So chris and his family are dead?... YES GOOD BYE AND GOOD RIDDANCE YOU SPOILT BRAT WOOOOO!
| Callum chapter 17 . 2/17/2013
That was amazing this is just unbelievable that's all i can say right now
| Callum chapter 16 . 2/17/2013
brilliant as expected even though i haven't finished reading this story and if u do mention them again you should have went back to T.U.F.F more maybe Dudley had silently continued being a agent or something just an idea. WI Amy hadn't escaped from the two robots, Kitty hadn't had her fight with Rouge and help Sonic, the president had listened to Kitty and had destroyed the phone, the tornado was grounded when the EMP blast happened but G.U.N had managed to stop the rockets some how, Gamma hadn't help and Knuckles (A) did die (B)didn't die but couldn't fight on but Gamma comes in later,if whatever Rouge does she does the opposite.
Never stop writhing you have a natural talent
| Samuel chapter 19 . 2/6/2013
out of all the stories i have read yours is the best, not only does it have me guessing what will happen next, it is also has been easy to see who is on which side, but i didn't know how you would work snaptrap back into the story, but it was a good idea theway you did it though. i have enjoyed your story so much that i have copied and pasted it to my word processor, so if our internet goes nuts i can read it without this site, plus work on a couple of grammatical errors i have noticed. although you thinking that tails "falling for" kitty was very creepy and downright wierd, and because of that i have skipped over those parts in the story. keep in mind that i have also read each chapter at least twice, scrutinizing every single bit of it and have decided this, you're a talented writer and the fact that it took me over a month to read it the first time meant you have the capilities to write something that keeps the readers coming back for more. i don't know how to put this any other way, but it is this, your story is my favorite because i believe that kitty has not been given the respect that she deserves in her show and i like sonic x and its cast of lovable characters, but i didn't like you killing the thorndikes, but i can't blame you though, it would have meant more characters to keep track of, but i also enjoyed all of you combat and fight scenes because when moments look their bleakest there is a silver lining to be seen. so please continue working on this story because i would really like to know what happens next. also, i have taken up writing up crossovers myself, i haven't posted any yet because i need to work out the grammer and my possible first post will involve a crossover between ncis an loonatics unleashed where the girl from loonatics gets sent to the ncis universe to unwittingly stumble into a murder in progress and become an agent later on, and will do the same thing for kitty and arcee from transformers prime because i don't believe that they get enough respect in their shows, but we'll see ho this works out because my lonatics ncis crossover is nearing its fifty page mark in my word processor and i do hope you read this because it was typed in under twenty minutes on a wii-u game-pad
| callum chapter 15 . 1/22/2013
lovely detail and loved what sonic said to kitty i couldn't stop laughing . i love this story and you are by far my fav author. WI kitty said yes to sonic or maybe rouge was found out eggman let the two back in and they saw it
| callum chapter 16 . 1/12/2013
an epic showdown INSIDE EGGMAN sounds a bit weird don't ya think ha
| callum chapter 14 . 1/12/2013
WI maybe tails or topaz or possibly amy (which i wouldn't mind much) get KIA or badly wounded which would trigger a few new events. possiblities if they have a big part in the fight vs Eggman the that wouldn't happen maybe sonic loses it and goes dark. stuff like that
| callum chapter 14 . 1/5/2013
amazing to say the least. pls make more sonic/T.U.F.F puppy stories. that part with sonic and kitty was pretty smart alot of WI ideas but don't have time. sry
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/5/2013
great build up and the suspense is brilliant. being honest i think you should send this into to sega and nick to see if they would do i guess it would be a movie with 3 or 4 parts maybe more. worth a shot and if nick someday buy sonic or however it works this would be perfect for a crossover. WI sonic is dating someone. they do try to rescue cream and see rouge. sonic calls in manic and sonia (sonic's brother and sister from sonic underground) to help them in the attack or anyone. keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/1/2013
A suggestion for chapter twenty might be Rouge and Dudley becoming a temporary team since Norge is no longer a part of GUN and Dudley as the ex tuff agent, but it it your story and you can do what you want so that is alright with me. Even though I've read your entire story so far, I've been reading it over a few times and I've really appreciated you using sonic x characters because I spent my whole summer watching the series online, and I would have been completely lost in any other sonic universe
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/21/2012
I really would like it if you would post a few more chapters because you story is one of my all time favorites.