|Reviews for Dark Angel|
| IasWraith chapter 17 . 1/16
Please come back and update this.
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/6
You seriously need to update I love the story although you need to give Han and Leia a scene sometime soon
| T. Alana M chapter 17 . 8/28/2013
You must update! :DD
But how can Vader breathe without his mask?
| T. Alana M chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
Ana's annoying. :P
This is great! :D I love how Leia and Anakin are still all family, even if they're evil.
| The Queen of Valencia Torgue chapter 17 . 5/27/2013
Wow. This is great, keep it up!
| dark nightmere chapter 17 . 5/12/2013
I think that like in the film luke should refease his father offer and fall into the air vents where he will end up underneath cloud city. I think that Leia should confront her family on naboo and ask them if Han ever loved her and they should tell her that he did but because he abandoned her and the empire those feelings are gone. I think that Leia should hear Luke's plea for help but unlike the film she should ignore it because she is evil and a sith and the only one she cares for is her father. I think that Ana should sense that Luke is in trouble evan though she does not have the force she should be able to hear him and return to save luke who has last a hand in his fight with Vader. I think that Leia should be on enda where she will lead the troops in the battle to destroy the rebeleon and ensure the empires victroy. I think that Luke should confront Vader within the second death star but without the knowledge of Leia should be defeated yet again by his father who will be stronger than him in the force be refease to kill his son.
| Azera-v chapter 17 . 4/11/2013
Awesome take, can't wait to read more!
| Lord Wrath chapter 17 . 3/26/2013
| CloudyDream chapter 17 . 3/26/2013
Alright, I'm really glad I've found this. It's well done and interesting, though I do have a couple nitpicks; but I hope you'll know that these two of three oddities didn't distract me much from the story :)
First, how come no one (Bail, Ben...) does realize that Angel is Leia? I mean, it *is* obvious, with all the people speculating her identity, and the few who actually know something can't conncet the dots. Somewhat unrealistic, IMO. Second, Ana is just blank. Meaning, she doesn't have much of a characterization; you should work on that. She's just a non-entity, The only dialogues she has is Leia's dialogue from the OT, and that is Third, and the thing that bugs me the most.
An AU is different from canon, for its definition. Furthermore, an AU that's so massive, with a character completely switching allegiance and a new character replacing them, well, that makes for huge changes, and having *everything* playing out like canon is unrealistic. Especially dialogues, fixed plot points I might understand, but the dialogues depend on the person, and expecting Ana to act and think like Leia only makes her even more of a tool than she is (same goes for other characters interacting with her just a they'd do with Leia, and everything happening the same).
Again, I hope my complains don't make you think I'm flaming - I'm not, really. All in all, I quite enjoyed your story and thank you for sharing it with us.
| Crazy chapter 17 . 3/15/2013
How is Leia going to react? Yes, I figured out that Lady Vader is Leia. How did Vader get her?
| scifiromance chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
This AU just gets more and more amazing! :D Well done for writing!
Thanks for your review of 'If Tomorrow Comes' too, I appreciate it. :) I hope Bryg is going okay except for being fed up with being pregnant.
| radiactive chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
quite a good story
| DragonsFlame117 chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
Yay! And finally, unmasked!
| Rookworm chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
YAY! Finally an update on this one, you've made my day!
| Starkiller chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
Amazing! Please update soon!