Reviews for What Happens When River Wins A Bet
Frogmo chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Really enjoy you not one for the diary and i love this! was really hot and i hope you do some more that tie in with the other chapters from not one for the diary! Please :P
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
i loved this, it was really very sweet
TisZiny chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
this really was fluffy smut. you have powers, methinks, i can only seem to write river/11 angst!
DoctorRosie chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
So beautiful! Omg i love it :D
Igneous Pride chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
For gods sake woman, stop being so self deprecating in your A/Ns! You're brilliant and you know.

Now go off and write more 11/River smut to amuse us with!

(Dance monkey dance)


Love and affection (and a cyber slap across the head)

Igneous P (Your avid fan)

Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
No, I think I've seen fluffier- but that had been annoying. This was perfict. (can't spell, gerrrrrrr)
Doctor-River chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I loved that, very sexy and we need lots of Doctor/River sex! D
x-Pick'n'Mix-x chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Love it :D
make-my-heart-beat chapter 1 . 6/23/2011

oh dear heavens, Hannah you are all sorts of awesomes xD

I love the way that it wasn't angsty with the whole 'firsts and lasts' thing. And the fact that I can imagine her perfectly ;)

Oh, seriously that has just made me SO happy :) loves forever and ever :D xxxx
gidget89 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011


Does this mean you're open to smutty continuations on the chapters in NOFTD? Because I can make a list, lol.
tardisinthesgc chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
YAY! i was ever so disapointed when the next part after he lost the bet in 'not one for the diary' wasn't a sequel, so this made my day! this was fantastic! 3
starrynitetyme chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I was sad I didn't have any new Diary chapters in my inbox but then I found all these new things and they're fab so you're forgiven :)

Great job, per usual. Thank you for writing!
Songbird15 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
You have no need to be nervous about this one. It's wonderful, and I've read more than my fair share of smut. You did a good job keeping it romantic and not trashy. It's all a matter of word choice.

I kind of want more~
Fran16 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
WOW! No need to be nervous about your writing - it's amazing! x
Stargatecrazy chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Bam, I guessed the smell of the oil was River *is smug* But that was a lovely way to end this fic *is all fan girly*

Us dirty minded people request more dirty fics...handcuffs, that's all I'm saying :')

But this was amazing! :D

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