Reviews for Promises
GirlWhoLovesAnime chapter 1 . 5/28
Um... Excuse me while I go take a cold shower... (xwX)
russianwinter013 chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
I absolutely cannot see Knock Out or OptimuS Prime doing this, not in any scenario whatsoever. You, dear author, have taken two of my favorite Cybertronians and turned them into beings with about the same sense of dignity as human sluts.

I do not see how people can stand twisting two of the most liked Transformers and making them this way. Knock Out is a narcissistic, sharp-tongued, and smart individual, not a whore who would spread their legs and masturbate to get attention. Optimus is a noble, wise and strong hearted leviathan who would give his life even for the likes of a tyrannical brother.

Honestly, this piece of trash (be thankful that I am not typing a few choice words right now) makes me sick. And now you know it.
LobstaFace17 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
OH MAH PRIMUS! Sweetness, you got talent. Ah mean… hot damn… ;)
The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
You’ve got to be kidding me. Not only is this against the site’s rules, but Knock-Out wouldn’t even come close to doing this in real life. Not even Optimus. So the entire piece of Knock-Out straddling Optimus and Optimus just taking it like a bitch raises a few eyebrows, but I gotta admit, it did make me laugh because the sex scenes and the dialogue were so bad.

“Who would miss an opportunity to watch such a shameless slut?” – Me-ouch. Slut-shaming. Or better, yet, attaching female ingenuity with male chastity. You’re basically calling Knock-Out a whore, but if anything, it shows how much of a whore you are. Seriously, this sex-scene was just bad. Why would Knock-Out even do this, and most of all, why would Optimus Prime even do it in the first place?

Jesus. I’ve watched pornos that have better dialogue than this. Oh, well, it doesn’t matter. You’re a smut slut, and
you know what we do with sluts? We burn them. Before cutting off their tongues and having the crowd tear them apart, of course ;)
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Oh the slutty goodness.

Riyappe Paws chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Pffffft...hahaha, epic fail Knockout! And Optimus, tsk tsk tsk. What was in your energon ration? Nice work, this is my OTP.
InsaneGrizzlies chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
LMFAO! Oh, Optimus... Bwahahaha.
Rainbow-Velociraptor chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
This has got to be one of my most favorite smut stories. Optimus and KnockOut is my secret otp, and just simply adored this story.

Keep up the excellent work!
Lady Minuialwen chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
PrimesSPARROW chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
love it
SummerMistedDragon chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
sant04 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
XD Prime is an ass! XD
Felinafullstop chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
I loved this!

renegadewriter8 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
See Knock Out! That what you get for assaulting unsuspecting, peacefully recharging mechs! XD

wow this was so HOT! Optimus you cheeky bastard! LOL

Great job! Very nice!

*fans self*
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