Reviews for Tale of the Kurai Kitsune |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i get what you are trying to say, but he's a ninja and has had an entire year to 'heal'. not to say he should be completely fine, but that he should be operational. his occupation doesn't allow for him to break like that in the middle of a fight. the hokage or Kakashi would have seen to it that he wouldn't freeze up in the middle of a fight. mandatory therapy would have been issued in a case as bad as that. otherwise, you get something like this happening, and it's just not practical for a ninja. i won't pretend to entirely understand a really bad case of ptsd as it's very complex, but an entire ninja village with a whole ass clan dedicated to the mind, should be able to understand and heal it better than any modern day medicine or techniques. i love the story and im merly expressing my thoughts. not exactly a criticism, but still kinda is |
![]() ![]() good story. wish it was longer. |
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![]() ![]() This is a wonderful story. I am disappointed that you have chosen Hinata. Anko is a much better fit for Naruto in my opinion . I already gave my thoughts about that. The trauma that Naruto has makes sense to me. An orphan with no family or friends is suddenly given a team to bond with and I see Naruto eager to bond with them. Only to watch the only family you ever know get killed in front of said orphan. Yea I can definitely understand that severe trauma comes with that. All the better to strengthen my argument for Anko x Naruto. Hinata while kind and gentle, simply doesn’t have the right stuff to relate to Naruto with. Anko on the other hand can relate to Naruto about a lot of things. Much more than Hinata can. |
![]() ![]() I always believe that Anko is the best girl for Naruto. After reading the story so far, especially Sakuya whose personality matches Anko, I am more sure than ever that Anko belongs to Naruto. Both Anko and Naruto are outcasts hated by Konoha for reasons beyond their control. Both are passionate and impulsive and fun loving people. Both are named after food. They belong together. As much as I like Hinata she has no chemistry with Naruto. |
![]() ![]() With the Kurai Kitsune's skills, I can see him fighting 'almost' a guerrilla war, but targeting all child bearing age and below iwa citizens and Shinobi. While he may not get the elites, but can eliminate all the future of Iwa. Would love to see your take on a continuation in this vein. Thank you for your contribution to my reading pleasure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bit shit tbh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mostly like this story so far but the gauntlet is stupid. Stupid things like that usually mean the story is going to be a disappoint. I'm going to keep reading and hopefully this will be the exception instead of the rule. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please post the next chapter. Please its amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi I don't mean to sound rude or anything but could you tell me why you used the crp? it seems like a stupid law that contradicts certain aspects such as clan rights. a clan like the uchiha prize their dojutsu above all else so I think they would fight it. also it makes it seem like the council has a say in clan matters which they don't as they would have forbidden the cage bird seal. also clan's should be able to leave the village if they feel like the they aren't being treated fairly or went against the contract with the village. |
![]() ![]() Me estaba gustando mucho la historia ,pero enparejaste a naruto con hinata asi que ya no me interesa la historia y la dejo de leer ADIOS |
![]() ![]() No se que ven los fanaticos de hinata ,si en la serie es patetica siempre se escondia de naruto para espiarlo ,sin valor, timida ,cobarde, en la pelicula de Last fuerzan a naruto a quedarde con hinata para quedarse juntos ,en la serie de boruto es una simple ama de casa que burla, ni hablar que la serie de boruto que es una porqueria , ademas hacen sacrifican a kurama mas fome se puso la serie |
![]() ![]() as much as i like the naruhina pairing, I think it's too ridiculous at the same time. Hinata is completely pathetic, there's nothing special about her |
![]() ![]() Necesito la segunda parte de esta historia x favor |
![]() ![]() Unfortunately I didn't find the next part of the story. I have a pair of theories about what Naruto was thinking... One of them is that considering the metaphor of his note when leaving the village, it is likely that Kumo is involved in his plans, thinking of Killer Bee, a Jinchuuriki with a mastery of his beast's chakra, making him a perfect candidate for Naruto if he wants to get even stronger. Also, with the mention of Fu, I'm thinking that the Jinchuurikis of the other beasts are part of his plan for Iwa, probably a union between some of them to attack the village. I would like to know more about the next part if it's possible. |