Reviews for Harry Potter and the Restored Legacy
Darklordcomp chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
for the love of god what is with all the crossovers Jesus XD
DeathsTouchOfLife chapter 12 . 9/1/2016
How dare the other house elves let tonto burn the infamous rubber duck of frollo the elvish(personal nickname) and why didn't you write no rubber ducks were harmed in the making of this chapter but some to toe were but he burned a rubber duck so it's ok
Ratedjforjess chapter 9 . 1/31/2016
Great plot but the story is written very odd
Bronze chapter 8 . 1/22/2016
It's really too bad you can't leave a negative number of galleons to someone. If it were, I'd leave a 9 with two thousand zeros after to APBW Dumbledore and a 9 with four thousand zeros after it to RB Weasley. All of it in negative numbers. To Bella I'd leave Umbitch, dead or alive, if allowed. To the Ministry I'd leave one thermonuclear device of the thirty megaton range on a timer to truly light up the ministry building. To Andi I'd add another twenty thousand galleons to what Sirius left her and double for what he left Nym.
Bronze chapter 7 . 1/22/2016
As to that Family Restoration Act, There are none so blind as those that will not see. Or in other words, the pure bloods want to see the Potter line end yet they pass laws that make it possible for the Potter line to expand greatly. Another way of thinking about it is Blind as a bat and thick as a brick.
msremus119 chapter 1 . 1/17/2016
andyjhorton chapter 33 . 12/28/2015
i enjoyed the story and read through in one night. only problem i had was your response to reviewers. not that they should not get a response but it was a large distraction from the story. within the responses were hidden author notes and as a reader who has no idea what the reviewer had said all i could see was a one sided conversation. maybe put something to separate it from the story other than italicized chapter headings or the word begin. also place them at the bottom. if you make an author not place the letters A/N in bold type.

That said... this was a good harem story, there were fluff scenes but not too many or too long. The writing was good with few grammatical errors. Your portrayal of the Malfoys was better than most stories i read unless there is some kind of slash element to it.

All in all ill check out some of your other fics... thank you
evans16 chapter 33 . 12/16/2015
great story!
BartGamesNL chapter 16 . 11/19/2015
Netherlands FTW!
ADarkLord chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Soooo. Have you read Percy Jackson?
Akane Mosoa chapter 33 . 10/22/2015
the love good names appear to be from buffy the vampire slayer, bones are from twilight, greengrass are plant related, except for Isaac the grangers and potters are cannon. I don't know about the patils and blacks though the middle patil reminds me of ghandi
CherryBlossoms016 chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
KOWALSKI! Hehe...the penguins of madagascar are hilarious...
Valiryo chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
Ugh, anime references.. now I can't continue reading, what a shame.
justin.jossart chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
After reading the first few chapters... This story is so hard to read. Confusing. It doesn't flow. Too many spelling and grammatical mistakes.

Plus I have yet to see a scene between Harry and any female lol. It's like reading a smut fix (quick, dirty, doesn't make sense) except without the smut lol.
RoseGarden11235813 chapter 7 . 4/2/2015
I have to ask: are the peguins a Kane Chronicles reference? Just curious.
Sorry I'm just reading this now. I discovered only a few months ago and have been working my way through it. Excellent story so far - do you have any original works? I'm always on the lookout for a New author...
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