|Reviews for What Is Built|
| Runt the Brave chapter 44 . 1/25
I just came back, looked at this story, and got super sad that it hasn't been continued and all that loveliness. I miss this story muchly.
| Runt the Brave chapter 45 . 11/30/2012
I squealed. Aloud.
And am now going to curl up and fall asleep and dream of your awesome story.
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/11/2012
Great story. But there is one thing I don't understand. How could Sinclair have the memories of Tuzanor when he hadn't become Valen yet?
| Guest chapter 44 . 8/22/2012
This is my favorite B5 fanfiction. If only the updates were up a little bit faster. But, as I know very well, writing comes in its own time, and cannot be rushed. So just keep updating, and I will be content.
| Janice chapter 44 . 8/21/2012
I've been anxiously awaiting the next installment, and you did not disappoint. I love the tender moment between John and Delenn in the beginning.
| logged-out-Runt chapter 44 . 8/21/2012
So fantastic. This whole story is fantastic.
| NWHS chapter 44 . 8/21/2012
Another well-developed chapter. This was definitely a difficult, highly emotional episode. I thought everyone's acting in this episode was wonderful. The silence when everyone realized the sacrifice that would be made for the many was palpable. Nicely handled. As was the sections with Lennier.
| Runt the Brave chapter 43 . 7/29/2012
OH MY INEXPRESSIBLE LOVE OF THIS STORY.
Seriously, you hit EVERY POINT of that conversation that I always wished they had in the series. Oh, it's just about as close to perfect as you can get for a gapfiller. And after a full week of visiting potential colleges, driving, editing, more driving, and with nothing on my creative horizon by editing, you've reminded me that THERE IS GOOD IN THE CREATIVE WORLD.
Excellent chapter. I needed this.
| NWHS chapter 43 . 7/26/2012
Meant to review this when I read it a few days ago. Wonderful. Absolutley wonderfully done. You're depth of emotion, characterization, and common sense and feasible additions makes for a captivating read. I look forward to reading your take on the Shan'Fal and the wedding.
| Guest chapter 42 . 7/9/2012
Ah, another well written and thought-out chapter. You did a very nice job filling in a few content holes. I, too, wondered why Delenn happened to be in the cargo area at just the right time.
| Runt the Brave chapter 42 . 7/8/2012
And heartbreaking. However, I don't think this chapter captured the show as well as you have in the past. I can't quite put a finger on it, but... eh... it feels really factual for a very emotional show. Delenn's a really emotional person and I still only really got the facts of the matter and not her inner most worries and fears, which I wanted to see.
| Runt the Brave chapter 41 . 6/7/2012
Absolutely adorable. Luv.
| Nyt Yanse chapter 41 . 6/6/2012
That Drazi Ambassador has always pissed me off...
I love the JD reunion scenes, very fitting. Can't wait for more!
| Runt the Brave chapter 40 . 5/30/2012
I have no words.
Well, besides the words necessary to explain the speechlessness.
Cian, THIS STORY IS AMAZING. You're doing a really good job at sticking to Straczynski's story. So good a job. It feels so real; you're telling a massive story from one point of view - unlike JMS - and it feels so completely and utterly real. This whole bit, exceptional in the show, is exceptional here as well. You capture Delenn very, very well. She's definitely your best character to write.
I do miss some of the depth and color that come from getting inside the other characters - in addition to Delenn. It's a little hard to only get her perspective when you already know everyone's. And still, every time, you manage to handle Delenn's perspective. And it's just brilliant.
Of course, emotional trauma is easy to work with, so these past couple of episodes gave you plenty of room to work with, eh. :P And, yeah, it's just excellent. Do you know about which episode you plan on ending it? Are you going beyond the series, because that would be something I'd really be interested to see: whether or not you could continue the quality of this story when you no longer have JMS's material to work with. Personally, I think you probably good. Anyway, yeah. Can't wait for next chapter. Can't wait for the chapter after that. And after that. And after that.
| schizo-nephalim chapter 40 . 5/28/2012
Wow...this is really incredible. It took several days of reading to get to this point, but I have to say this is probably one of the best written stories I've seen yet. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!