|Reviews for King of Dreams|
| Slytherin Kunoichi chapter 13 . 1/16
I don't think there are enough words to describe how much I love this story. There is just so much thought, so much detail and planning: from your story, to the characters and their emotions and even down to the music. I've read this story a dozen times; this most recent chapter twice before finally being able to force my brain into leaving a coherent review.
I had loved the way you had brought in Tony Stark and Pepper. And I admit in the the past I had worried about other side characters (Darcy, Clint, and Natasha), but all for nothing it seems as you've seamlessly integrated their individual roles into the story and put together another missing piece of the puzzle. It's such a relief to find this in a story. I'm confident you will maintain this dynamic.
I try to keep my reviews, for the most part spoiler free in case a prospective reader likes to get a general idea of what feedback the author has received. So I will just say I was very pleased with how things were handled between Leonard and Darcy, and Jane and Darcy. More importantly, I loved getting a good look into Leonard's thought process, not just about Shield and his circumstances; his own past and fears of who he was... But with how he felt about Jane as well. His scenes alone, and with Jane were simply marvelous.
I'm going to use an excerpt from this chapter: "I neglected you when you were right beside me," he continued, not minding her wish to say something more to it. "I just let you go and be captured by a stranger, and then I made you witness this side of me… I'm sorry, Jane. About the entire evening. Somehow I let it take a completely different way than I intended. It was wrong of me."
That scene, that speech just stuck out to me. Not just because its words I have longed to hear myself, but because right there in Leonard's words you see how Human he is; how human Loki is. Nothing is more human than being afraid to be vulnerable, and then letting that fear hold you back from the things you want most. And then to realize how it held you back, causing you to sabotage yourself and to be able to admit it is such growth. And it had such an impact on me, to see this version of Loki; to see Leonard worried over his decisions and past, and of losing Jane.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm dying to see how their date goes and how their relationship progresses. Please don't break my heart.
| aliciasmith2000 chapter 1 . 1/12
Please continue this story really soon its brilliant cant :)
| LoneAngel666 chapter 13 . 1/7
OH MY GOD THEY KISSED! :D YES YES YES FINALLY! :D XD They kissed! THEY FUCKING KISSED! YEAAAAAAH! Sorry, sorry about that. Just had to let it out. :P
Anyway I am SOOOOOOO incredibly happy that you updated, i was starting to worry. But the wait was worth it. I had forgotten how long your chapters were. :D Awesome! :D
Anyway it was so so good, I love Jane and Darcy's friendship and the adorable cute moments between Leonard and Jane just UH! :D And and the revelation Jane had about Lenny, just finally connecting the dots! :D Yes! And I'm really glad that when she figured that Lenny might be Loki she didn't immediately think like Darcy, crazy psycho killer, but she though "What made him this way? He wasn't born evil." Which i loved! :D :D Thanks So much about this chapter it was FANTASTIC! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next :D 3
P.S. I'm sure you've see Thor 2, so if it isn't a bother i was wondering what you though about it and the characters?
| fly2venus4tea chapter 13 . 1/2
Great update! I'm glad that you worked through the emotional aftermath of Jane's almost abduction and resolved the love triangle build up. I especially loved Jane's and Darcy's fallout and following make up. The way you wrote it, beautiful and so true. That's what I call a friendship. Reading that part made me want to grab my best friend and hug her tightly.
Leonard/Loki denying his past, his elter ego...that will blow up in his face soon, right?
That you let Jane figure it out who Leonard really is, surprised me, and that she still wants to be with him made me a puddle of feelings. Jane is the best.
I look forward to their first date...I hope they won't get interrupted because I have the feeling that the plot wants to have a say again and it will be loud, right?
| suze chapter 13 . 1/1
i'd been waiting so long for the kiss! :3
| Isabel M-Ameban chapter 13 . 12/30/2013
No wonder why Leonard isn't curious about his old self since he's so scared about the things he's able to do. That and the fact he knows he can be "blue". But eventually he had to face it up, no matter how much he loves his current life.
Well, at least they both had settle down the thing between them. Darcy behaves as a true royal friend here, although it never was very obvious to me she also had a thing for him. Still, the slapping thing... It seems Jane has become into a Slapper after the last movie. XD
Now, about "the realitation". Yes, I find Bret Thor is the most obvious thing about who could Leonard be, and also the little details about his physic and behaviour. I wonder if Leonard-Loki would realize "Bret's like guy" is the same Jane's old Love interest and why he should know him. I would be really wary about why SHIELD is asking me for that guy.
However, the part about Jane's reasoning I cannot buy is about "Odin punishing him amnesia"... Because it doesn't make sense Odin punish his wayward son with something he's unable to remember; Loki cannot recibe any punisment if he cannot recognize he's Loki or why he's getting punished.
Still, it's very brave for Jane to be able to start a relationship with somebody that is so suspicious. When we both learn the true, things will become really messy. And Thor's reaction!
I really wonder what Loki plans with this.
Look forward the next chapter.
| megumisakura chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
great,great chapter,love it!
| Kat-Knife chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
Yay! Loki and Jane are finally together! I'm glad that Jane has finally kind of figured out who Leonard really is and has started living her life again. Her thoughts about where Leonard really came from actually were plausible and I think that it is probably true. I was so excited to see this update and I hope you update soon! :)
| Rin chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
O my! Such great present! And they're finally going on date. I just can't wait for next chapter. I hope you will have many ideas and add something soon. ;) Have great New Year!
| V chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
That was a really good chapter, will LOKI ever figure out who he is?
| ErikChristineLover712 chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
My emotions were everywhere this chapter. At first I wanted to slap Darcy— then seeing Jane already got to it first, I was happy. I loved that "Leonard" and Darcy felt guilty about the kiss and everything. Then I when he asked out Jane I literally had a stupid grin on my face the whole time. Great Chapter, and I can't wait to see their first date :D
| Vonpohl chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
So glad to see this story back in action. I was on edge after the last chapter but I was glad that the world wasn't falling apart in this chapter (emotional distributions aside.) Kudos!
| Izwick chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
Wait, this isn't over, is it? Because it is quite good... Lovely characterizations, good plotting, et cetera. If it is over, congratulations, great story. If it isn't, I look forward to the next update!
| danny chapter 12 . 12/22/2013
Please add something!
| ErikChristineLover712 chapter 12 . 12/14/2013
Don't give up on this story. It is so good, and Jane and Loki haven't even gotten together yet. :/