Reviews for The Last Fallen One
Anito Works chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Thats awesome. You could have made it longer though, like about 3 chapters of how he found out how to break the spell. Because Uraha took all her lifetime just to induce enough power in a single puppet that would break the curse so how did a mere 13 year old child managed to do it a few days after his brothers death?
Izzi89 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
It's a really good story, i like the concept... and the OC, i just wish i was able to picture her better (since you didn't describe her) good job though!