Reviews for A Union Predetermined
Guest chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
Coooooooontinuuuuuueeeeeee i'm loving it and i'll keep checking for new chapters , even though i don't have an acount here ... but weell i like your writting and the story is pretty unique !
Lifeisfairduh chapter 3 . 5/9/2013
Why oh why do you torment us so? Heh. Just wanted to write that down :P I am practically in love with this, I mean I check it so many times, have read it so many times and am hoping that you update this whenever I browse through Nejiten fics.

I could practically sing you songs of praise and joy coming from the mouth of angels. The 'angels' of course are none other than me! Mwahahah! Feel my overbearing arrogance. Just joking.

Anyway I love this( not that those words haven't ever been said yet ) and I really really desperately hope that you update!
emachookie chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
So we'll see the next chapter next year?

Neji seems so stuck up but it'd be weird if he wasn't. He's so convinced that him and Tenten are meant to be and I just want to laugh. Though I know that they will get together, it just seems kind of funny how confident he is.

Seeing as he has their whole married life planned out, I wouldn't be shocked if he already has all the wedding details listed down if he even cares about those kind of things, which I think he actually doesn't.

The characters here are IC and it's so easy to read. My personal favorite is how you portray Neji, the stuck-up, fate-crazy, overconfident, snobby, bitter kid. I love it.
HiddenCamellia chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Please update soon!This a very good piece of work...and very very well written! :)
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Wow that just wow
Valentine35 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
HAHAHA! Oh gosh! It's just so adorable! I also caught the resemblance when Mito was first introduced!
blackeyedbandit chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
gah this is awesome you're so... youthful?
blackeyedbandit chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
aha this is such a great idea i love how your portray neji
xxxFlamingWingsxxx chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
Well, this is certainly new to me. In most cases, it is usually tenten who is head over heels with neji but that doesn't seem to be the case for this one. I'm curious as to how things will work out.

Regarding the yearly updates I find it disagreeable. I think that if you'll update yearly, some of the reader's might lose interest in this story because it is more likely that they'll forget about the plot. Or they might get impatient. I also don't understand the reason as to why it is supposed to be that way. Is it to build the tension for something exciting? I don't mean to offend you in any way or to jinx this story. I absolutely adore this story the moment i read the first chapter. So i hope that you get to update soon.
ElisabethDarling chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Awesome story! It is very well written and super entertaining to read! I hope you update soon :)
Lovedisease chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I really liked the fact that you started it during their younger days. it gives more impact, i think to the story.. anyway. i love this. please update soon . :)
BalerPaX chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I thought Neji was hilarious.
Seamew chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
This has got to be one of the most adorable ideas ever. Your execution of this plot is not only cute however, but also... we'll say "realistic," as realistic as this sort of thing can get. xD But what I mean is that I can totally picture this being canon, and so far you have a lovely mix of humor and semi-serious ninja life.

I love that Tenten understands the concept teamwork better than anyone else, first pointed out with Iruka, and later during the test. Neji doesn't always see all!

Nicely written and edited with no mistakes that I can recall, and a nice writing style that is very easy to follow. Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to more!
Senka Hitomi chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
Gah! This chapter has been up for like a month, and I haven't reviewed it until now. I am the worst long-lost twin/semi-beta ever! (Okay, perhaps a little overly dramatic, but I digress...)

But seriously, this chapter was great. I love Lee. XD He's so obtuse. "It is so beautiful that it leaves even the most intelligent speechless; Neji has not been able to speak for over an hour!" Hands down, my favorite line. That is TOTALLY Lee.

I love the developing team bond that's demonstrated in this too. Obviously, Neji is the least likely to step in and help a teammate, so Tenten has to kind of pave the way for him. I especially liked the realization at the end, that despite the fact that Neji's a genius, he still has quite a bit to learn about being a shinobi.

Overall, great chapter! I've missed seeing regular updates on your stories! Hope you continue with this one soon. :D

- Senka
Shadows of Tofu chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
Very well-written piece. The progression from their academy days to their first training session was well-organized. I also love how Tenten turned there somewhat distaste for each other and directed it towards friendship. I can't wait to see how Neji's life is going to change as he warms up to Lee and Tenten. Please update!
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