Reviews for A Union Predetermined
372259 chapter 3 . 9/24/2014
Loving this story, I hope you update it soon :) !
372259 chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
ahahhahHAHAHHAhahahHAHAH! BRILLIANT first chapter! The ending was hilarious! Can't wait to read the rest :)
Lady Syndra chapter 3 . 8/21/2014
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
Coooooooontinuuuuuueeeeeee i'm loving it and i'll keep checking for new chapters , even though i don't have an acount here ... but weell i like your writting and the story is pretty unique !
Lifeisfairduh chapter 3 . 5/9/2013
Why oh why do you torment us so? Heh. Just wanted to write that down :P I am practically in love with this, I mean I check it so many times, have read it so many times and am hoping that you update this whenever I browse through Nejiten fics.

I could practically sing you songs of praise and joy coming from the mouth of angels. The 'angels' of course are none other than me! Mwahahah! Feel my overbearing arrogance. Just joking.

Anyway I love this( not that those words haven't ever been said yet ) and I really really desperately hope that you update!
emachookie chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
So we'll see the next chapter next year?

Neji seems so stuck up but it'd be weird if he wasn't. He's so convinced that him and Tenten are meant to be and I just want to laugh. Though I know that they will get together, it just seems kind of funny how confident he is.

Seeing as he has their whole married life planned out, I wouldn't be shocked if he already has all the wedding details listed down if he even cares about those kind of things, which I think he actually doesn't.

The characters here are IC and it's so easy to read. My personal favorite is how you portray Neji, the stuck-up, fate-crazy, overconfident, snobby, bitter kid. I love it.
HiddenCamellia chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Please update soon!This a very good piece of work...and very very well written! :)
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Wow that just wow
Valentine35 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
HAHAHA! Oh gosh! It's just so adorable! I also caught the resemblance when Mito was first introduced!
blackeyedbandit chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
gah this is awesome you're so... youthful?
blackeyedbandit chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
aha this is such a great idea i love how your portray neji
xxxFlamingWingsxxx chapter 3 . 9/22/2012
Well, this is certainly new to me. In most cases, it is usually tenten who is head over heels with neji but that doesn't seem to be the case for this one. I'm curious as to how things will work out.

Regarding the yearly updates I find it disagreeable. I think that if you'll update yearly, some of the reader's might lose interest in this story because it is more likely that they'll forget about the plot. Or they might get impatient. I also don't understand the reason as to why it is supposed to be that way. Is it to build the tension for something exciting? I don't mean to offend you in any way or to jinx this story. I absolutely adore this story the moment i read the first chapter. So i hope that you get to update soon.
ElisabethDarling chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
Awesome story! It is very well written and super entertaining to read! I hope you update soon :)
Lovedisease chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I really liked the fact that you started it during their younger days. it gives more impact, i think to the story.. anyway. i love this. please update soon . :)
BalerPaX chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I thought Neji was hilarious.
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