|Reviews for You Want My Outline Drawn|
| Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
:)(: Dang on..that was super amazing and sexy. Hermione and Pansy together is one of my favorite pairings. I like when Hermione takes charge. I love the sweet 'i love you' at the end.
| DreamingOfMyGirl chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
paragraphs are a great thing... you should try using them. Also, sex scenes can be really detailed without putting off the reader. You're sex scene is rather laking... ie my example "Hermione licked down to Pansy's hole and lapped up all the juice as it flowed out of her girlfriends vagina." Really is that necessary? There are so many better ways of saying the same thing would saying like that... blech.
| HarukaIs chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
| A Smouldering Soul chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
| OliviabensonSVU4 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
I guess my first review didn't submit.
Anyway, thank you baby for writing me a smutty fanfiction. It was great! You're amazing. 3
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Great One-shot! I really enjoyed reading it!