|Reviews for Bite Back|
| lauraxxx chapter 1 . 1/10
:D I loved this!
| pinkspring10101 chapter 16 . 8/9/2012
mann i love this story update soon xx
| redhedlund chapter 9 . 7/16/2012
I really love Billy. Damn, I'd love to have one for myself !
| redhedlund chapter 8 . 7/16/2012
This little fucker is going to have some trouble when Billy will get his ass out of the bar. This is going to be GOOD !
| redhedlund chapter 6 . 7/16/2012
"I tried to look at him seductively but probably ended up looking like I had something in my eye." - Honestly... I really love that girl. She's amazing !
""Quiet down Darley, last warning!" Payback's a bitch!" - She's so awesome ! Gosh !
| redhedlund chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
"I narrowed my eyes at him and sent him a 'what-the-hell' gesture. The corner of his mouth twitched into a smirk and he slowly let flicked his tongue over his bottom lip. Ohhh man! So he was trying to seduce me. Dick! I rolled my eyes and turned away." - Nice one !
"I didn't just slap him either. My fists curled and I gave him a sharp punch on his cheek, my knuckle hitting his bone." - :O YES YES YES.
"I mean I had, had this happen before but my God...he knew how to work that tongue. No wonder he was a man of few words, he was saving up his energy for other things!" - I love her, and I'd love to have that tongue between my legs.
"Clearly he was a busy man!" - No doubt about that !
""Are you wearing my cologne?" I grinned sheepishly at him, making him rumble with laughter, something I hadn't heard before." - Love it !
Great, as the others chapters i've read so far !
| redhedlund chapter 4 . 7/15/2012
"I wouldn't even talk to him. I would be friendly and have fun and not think about the man that gave me the two best orgasms in my life...right?" - Billy... I wish.
"They stared at me darkly as he ravished her neck and throat, kissing seductively. I didn't know if it was taunting, insulting or seducing but I got pissed then. Why did he have to make everything about him?" - I so love your fanfic, seriously !
| redhedlund chapter 3 . 7/15/2012
""Billy..." I started not sure of what I was going to say.
"Don't worry, I'm only just getting started." " - Just saying : I'd love to fuck him too.
"I was glad he had left but part of me suspected that wouldn't be the last time I saw Billy Darley." - I have the same impression !
That was great !
| redhedlund chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
""Oooh we got a fighter." He growled, showing off his large pearly-white grin." - Love the way he makes fun of her !
"I think I surprised both of us when I threw my head upwards and forward, head butting him. White hot pain flashed in forehead. He let go of my hands and I threw one on my scalp. Shit that hurt!" - YES IT HURTS.
I seriously love it ! That's funny and Billy is perfect as always.
| redhedlund chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
"Watch your mouth." He whispered to me, angrily. I couldn't help what came out next.
"How about you watch my ass?" I turned on my heel then and stalked back to the bar. Chris gave me a high five, impressed.
OH MY GOD. THAT MADE ME LAUGH LIKE HELL ! I seriously love that girl and nice first chapter !
| gitarr chapter 16 . 7/1/2012
love it :) please update soon !
| hoppnhorn chapter 16 . 5/30/2012
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! If I could fill the review box with screams, I would. But alas, that wouldn't be very helpful. LOL.
SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! I read this forever ago, but I've been a mess trying to catch up with my responsibilities. You're moving to the US? YAY! Congrats!
This chapter was dark, but it was perfect. I loved Billy's reactions, they were spot on. And the fury he directed toward Josh...I want to help him with that. I'd enjoy that...which is frightening.
I know this isn't nearly enough to do you justice, but I'm on a tight schedule too. But I just wanted to let you know I loved it, and that I can't wait for more.
I LOVE THIS STORY. and i love ya girl. xo -R
| anon chapter 15 . 4/18/2012
please update soon! I want to see the climax :)
| hoppnhorn chapter 15 . 3/20/2012
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I can't be the only one thinking this. YAY! you delivered, much faster than I could, I'm afraid. I'm working on it though! Prepare yourself for a chapter! SOOO HAPPY TO READ THISSSS. you left me hanging and I was about ready to die. LOL.
LOVED THIS. defines this man to a T. -Sure, it was the longest amount of time he had spent with one chick but…he was Billy Darley. Notorious fuck and duck, wham bam thankyou ma'am! - You have made me a very happy reader. :D
I also really liked how you took the lines from the movies and turned them into lines for your story. Put this plot smack dab in the middle of that reality, AND THANK JESUS YOU KEPT JOEY ALIVE. when I first started reading the lines from Bones' office, I started freaking out, thinking you were going to kill Joey. But then i got it. *whew* thank heavens. love that boy.
AND OMG. This Josh guy, his motivation is INCREDIBLE. you made a 2D villain VERY VERY REALISTIC. the lacrosse injury...i just...a;sdlkalkjdflksjdglk. You sold this guy so well, I was sitting there, awe struck. So soooo well done. I can't give you enough praise for that bit. When he knocks on his knee...BAH. I'll stop ranting. INCREDIBLE.
-"Will you gimme some smack?" She asked Billy meekly.- Bahaha. is the sky brown? no no nooo. Made me laugh.
THIS CHAPTER...SO GOOD. Honestly, I'm howling for more my dear. Absolutely amazing job. :) Can't wait for more! And I promise I'm working on an update for ya, promise promise promise.
| shadowcats chapter 14 . 1/27/2012
love this story keep up the gtoodpdat work please update soon