I really like it, especially where he goes 'what am I, fifteen'? Everyone seems pretty IC and I love the first paragraph. My favorite line is 'It choked him even though he didn't have to breathe'.

ok so where is ch 2 there talk

Aww. This was so sad and sweet. Poor Spike, so confused by his feelings and haunted by a song and "the" girl! I love Tara in this story; she really is such a warm and wonderful character. Very well done.

An amazing beginning to this Buffy fic. You can tell Spike is slightly nervous about what he's got to tell Buffy in the next chapter. I've noticed you do like to have your chaptersend on a cliffhanger... I loves it!

Oh- not a one-shot! (That came out wrong). Please can this be more than a one shot? (Is that better?) A bit of pre-smashed Spuffy in the crypt after struggling confessions, arguments, and rising passion? It's delicious, perfect music choice, too good for just one helping!