Reviews for What a Girl Wants HP Version
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I liked Ginny's first person p.o.v. for the most part, but have a hard time believing that H/G got together at ages 11 & 10. That would've been more believable a few years later. There are some minor issues with grammar and spelling also, including the name of the singer, Ms. Aguilera. The conversations are pretty "stiff" in this as well. (e.g. "Yes, I will go for a walk with you." This doesn't sound like Harry.)