you have a great fic with an interesting twist of the naruto world and while I think it has a lot of potential I just can't appreciate the dark turns you keep adding to it. first you kill off teuchi (the readers choice wasn't really a choice since only death made since), have rie working with danzo, and have naruto watch his mother die (probably 100s of times). the story is just getting too depressing for me. I hope you do finish this thought since regardless of what I feel about this fic you have done a great job in making this a unique naruto fic that I think many other reader will love (if they don't already)

If you didn't know, there's a song called "Cruel to be Kind". I love that song!

I know for a fact I read that discussion about the summoning clans word for word in another story the other day! It threw me off because I remember the conversation, so I'm wondering if someone copied this part of the story, or if this is your rewrite of a previous story.

Miss the creativity and the epic scope this story had, but hoping you’re writing bigger and better things outside of a fandom now.

Idk where you’re at but man you need to come back and write more on ur free time it’s 2023 and there are no good fanfic nomo I love this story and I’m praying u get motivated to come back on this app

beta bitch

Hi, I don't know if you're still there somewhere, but I guess it hasn't been years since you posted this story.

and i want to finish it given your notes and comment i assume you are now in your career heck you might even have a family if my age estimates are correct but i want you to know that i will conclude this for you and all the people who ever enjoyed this story greetings i am necroz

Why is Sasaki still alive

I pray fake sasuke won’t play a big part in this story. It will really ruin it for me

Lame OC

One piece ahh goodbye and promise

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Really love this story can't wait for new chapters

This litteraly gave me goosebumps, good job

Not the ramen guy !