chapter 17 is pure aids
''get over yourself''
really nigga?
they can go suck a big fat donkey dick for that one

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bro are you an actual real life supervillain? this fic's Naruto MIGHT have the worst life ever recorded in fiction next to like Guts or smth

This really needs an update. lol.

Its been what, 10 years. Come back please

10 years WTF bro ¿are You great?

I hoped you would have the balls to finally kill Kabuto, no other author I've read so far had.
Keeping him alive to revive Madara in the end is always the reason invoked...
That would have been such a nice turnout.
Oh well.

I wasted my time with this fanfiction...

Look, the writing is good and all but that's about it. i'm aware that by just having that any fanfiction already deserves a lot of respect but this is disappointing. The MCNarutois so poorly written it hurts, the action is good except when Naruto comes in, then it becomes a corny ben 10, power rangers fight. The way the story is developing pretty much contradicts the whole premise of the first chapter. I'm giving this a 5/10, not impressed.

So corny yikes. Pretty mid story so far if im being honest. The amount of favorites this story has made me have higher expectations i suppose. Im not impressed

horrible chapter.

Trash, make naruto like his canonical counterpoint; because yours is just boring.

It's a shame 2015 since the last update for a story as nice as this one?
In any case as long as the couple is really Naruto x Rei because I love this couple 3

Yeah, I've heard that whole "itachi is REALLY a double agent"... FLIMSY, VERY FLIMSY...The problem with that is... HE SUCKS NUTS AT HIS JOB! He's totally WORTHLESS as a double agent... He supplies NO intel that they don't get on their own... He doesn't strike at the Akatsuki with any kind of competency... He's just TERRIBLE at it.. And he keeps INJURING KONOHA... Which a double agent SHOULD NOT DO! He's a LIABILITY, thus he SHOULD be "cut loose"... REVEAL the coup, reveal that the uchiha DID INDEED have something to do with the kyuubi attack(even if they aren't 100% SURE).. Put the extremely high bounty on his head... And then put sasuke in a HOLE somewhere and let Itachi know, he does ANYTHING AT ALL TO KONOHA, and sasuke NEVER SEES THE LIGHT OF DAY WITH LIVING EYES AGAIN! (he has a FAIRLY LARGE "hole in his armor" to exploit after all.)

"nothing would be the same anymore" when he finds out who he is (parentage)... Um.. Yeah it will, others don't know (somehow, I still say it's IMPOSSIBLE for everybody to be this BLIND and DUMB) and that's what changes things... The people that DO know are STILL going to keep all that a secret and ACT like they don't know (stupidly)... His situation doesn't change.. The people after him don't change... Heck, the Akatsuki have known since the beginning.. Since obito was there! ABSOLUTELY NOTHING changes... Except his own perception (which is a personal problem) It's been TOO LONG for the secret to have been held, for this to make a REAL difference... If it would have been known when he was 6 or 10 or even 12 THEN nothing would be the same... As it is? Not so earthshaking. BUT as far as the people(tsunade, Jiriaya, kakashi, etc).. They DIDN'T make "mistakes"... A "mistake" is ONE action that is regretted... I'm not even sure what to call this UTTER FARCE... Other then a "fast track to hell"... No, none of them will be having a "pleasant afterlife"(remember dante's inferno and what the ninth circle of hell is reserved for)... The almost DECADE AND A HALF of sheer stupidity is MIND-BOGGLING with it's CONSTANT actions that were absolutely unnecessarily cruel and regretted. I'm not even sure "forgiveness" can be given, because it WASN'T one or even 100 "bad actions"... It was THOUSANDS that they ALL kept performing. OVER AND ABOVE just "keeping a secret" in most cases.

I've never liked the akatsuki as characters.. This chapter and the previous one kinda PROVES WHY... I hated when Kisame and Itachi could just waltz in and waltz out of the village... It was dumb... This is my reasoning... If you have the group able to waltz in and waltz out of the hidden villages like a sunday stroll and you add that to their power (two of them can take down a tailed beast... So they REALLY DON'T NEED THEM).. Then they would just go from village to village, just dominating or wiping out each one before moving on to the next... You have to be VERY careful NOT to O.P. your villains in a story, as well as your hero.. And the Akatsuki are about as O.P. as you go... Because they eliminate the NEED for the tailed beasts... These "humans" are already more powerful then them. Just walking in and decimating the entire ninja force seems COMPLETELY possible thanks to this chapter and the last... For just 2.. Now imagine ALL of them... See? It makes the STORY ITSELF make no point... They ALREADY WON. It makes it JUST AS "boring", as if the hero is too powerful... There is no point to "hidden organizations" and sneaking around through the underworld.. They can just "show up" and pwn a place. It's difficult but the "antagonists" need as CURBED/LIMITED as the "protagonists"... (You can just make a LOT more of the antagonists).