Reviews for Naruto: Potential Realised |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ...why would Naruto put poor Tenten on the same team as both Neji and that asshole? not to mention the letch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...i thought Neji got promoted as well? also, why didn't Naruto shut that asshole up by summoning one of the toads? |
![]() ![]() This was going well until he turned into Rei's bitch. I don't get why so many people find shit like this funny |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't think naruto was bratty at all. it's shaping up to be a great story thus far |
![]() ![]() Naruto is such a fucking brat. I hope whoever you are that your parents regret having you. If this is the level of writing that you can do, I fear for your parents. You are a waste of space and you should KILL YOURSELF NOW. |
![]() ![]() You made Naruto seem like a fucking brat. Your depiction of Naruto is awful. Combine that with nonsensical inconsistencies and you get this abomination of a story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely dumb if Jiriaya wanted to escape all he had to do was set up a reverse summon and that would be it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really to bad this story hasnt been updated in long time its very good story ! ! ! ! ! |
![]() ![]() Started of well although your involvement of cannon characters and OC are done badly in the sense that you abandon the characters out of the actual main plot. The relationships between characters is confusing, their not established well I’m not a fan of rei character nor the romance involved with her she seems to take advantage of Naruto and exploiting him. I don’t mind OCs although you have way to many to my liking and just diverts the attention from the cannon characters which most people would like to see especially the involvement of Konoha 12 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I caught up to the end and now I'm sad cuz it will never be finished but it is a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I rlly hope you haven't abandoned fanfic and I rlly want to read the rest of this fnfic :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bad Naruto characterization. Naruto wouldn't wait three days at home for a letter. He would bust into the hokages office on the first minute of the first day. And Naruto would never think "I decided stop with my attention seeking habit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto isn't ready for chunin rank. He cannot master two powerful wind jutsu within a couple days when he had to do hard core shadow clone training just for the leaf splitting and then the waterfall splitting exercise which come before any jutsu |
![]() ![]() Finally, a good chapter. The past couple chapters were ridiculously boring. |
![]() ![]() Did you have to make this chapter so boring? Honestly, no one cares about the other characters right now. We all want to see Naruto training. Just a huge waste of a chapter. |