Reviews for Naruto: Potential Realised |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Overall this was a pretty good fic with lots of potential. It’s a shame it hasn’t been updated in 7 years, I’d love more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was loving this arc until Teuchi TRYED TO KILL NARUTO that just fucking hurt |
![]() ![]() It feels like Naruto is just blaming everything on him being an orphan, when most of this stuff is basic things everyone knows. Naruto also doesn’t blame nothing to a couple things on being an orphan. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story, with it was finished but happy there was so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... Shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well... Shit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh come on man... big Fire jutsu inside a city full of pedestrian? i thought your naruto suppose to be smart? |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... the writing is good enough i guess. but i dont your Naruto is more edgier than the ultimate avenger Sasuke. and why in the hell Naruto hide his justsu capability to his new team-mates? isn't it good for the team to know all the team-mates capability so the team work go smoothly? it seem he just being edgy for no reason |
![]() ![]() ![]() The fucking Sakura chan… wish authors would try to write Naruto better than Kishimoto did |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't help but feel the team number is a reference to Spartan B312. it's most likely not, but still |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where the fuck is the rest of the story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, this was good. Sucks that it’s been abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How could this? O-Of all things... all existences... it just had to be him?! I've seen Sandaime, Yondaime, or even the whole Konoha being enemies to our dear blonde prankster, but Teuchi?! I... I don't know what to say. I have mixed feelings about this revelation... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it thus far wish there was more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't see any 'potential being realized' here. Naruto is the same mentally impaired young man as in the original, it's just a different version of the same story. A more boring one, at that. I fully admit that it's written really well, however. The dialogue is believable, the characters are lively. It's just the story itself is not what the description says. |