|Reviews for The Courtship of Richard Castle|
| scarletblusssh chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
haha! no! this is good! :D really funny :P
| bones35 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Well, first, I hope you did well on your exam!
This was a really good chapter and looking forward to more.
I love the Lanie and Kate chat; just really well-written. The Esposito/Ryan confrontation with Castle was priceless!
| phnxgrl chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
I loved this beginning! I love the fact that Kate had gotten rid of DMB and now is in the throws of frustration station central! I loved how her dreams are telling her to go for it but her head has not quite caught up!
I loved the girl talk with Lanie! It was perfectly voiced! I loved how Esposito appeared and then left to leave the girl to talk! I loved how Kate looked around Lanie's place and noticed small changes evidence of someone else's influence was at work in her friend's life. I loved the comparison in Kate's mind to where there was nothing even similar in her apt except maybe Castle's shirt! But that did not count because she took that he did not leave it!
I loved how when Kate was at Lanie's the Boys came to see Rick! I loved how Rick finally awaking after sleeping hunched over his laptop found Alexis entertaining the boys! Too Funny! I loved how the boys were concerned of what happened at the precinct was not reason he had been missing for the past week! I loved how Rick defended himself saying Kate knows why I have not been there! Too Funny! I loved the first thing that popped into his head was this "isn't like the summer, I swear!" Too Funny! I loved the ending where Rick runs from the room! Too Funny! Please continue!
| Eleantris chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Honestly? I didn't like it.
I loved it! How could you not think this was any good? It was so realistic - I could picture everything happening here, and hear the characters in my head. It takes an awesome writer to be able to do that. :D This was a brilliant chapter, and I really, really can't wait for more!
| Kukor25 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Love the ending with the three guys. I could almost envision this scene on TV. LOL...
| TheAvatarGuru chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Please continue! I want to read more! This was really good
| LittleLizzieZentara chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Huh, not sure why you didn't like this. You had Beckett saying and thinking everything I've been saying and thinking about her for the last couple months. I'm glad, in your story at least, she's starting to get a clue. I wouldn't use words quite as strong as she did, but I would say that she's an adorable idiot that has been in serious denial because of her fears. And I LOVED Ryan and Esposito ganging up on Castle like that. Ryan not being able to pull off the tough guy act really cracked me up. Long chapters work fine for me. And frequent updates are AWESOME!
| FanficwriterGHC chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
1. Long chapters? Those are wonderful. Love it.
2. This? This amazingly in-character follow up to 'Wrong?' GENIUS and fun and lovely and so full of good adjectives that I'm finding myself left wanting for one good enough (you've also made me verbose. Congratulations).
3. PLEASE continue. I love this piece. I can't wait for more.
4. Alexis is awesome.
5. Castle is a Tease and Kate is Adorable.
6. I loved this.
| RGoodfellow64 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Sorry to hear that you didn't like it, 'cause I did...a lot. I got such a kick how you had Rick set Ryan and Esposito up and then run away! Looking forward to more.
| ich-faultier chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I really, really like the fact that they (well, Beckett's doing it anyway) are opening up to other people about their issues. It's not really something Beckett would be good at but hey, isn't that why she is talking to Lanie about it all?
I'm curious as to why you aren't happy with it. It's well-written and it really doesn't read like filler even if the two of them don't interact at all.
| avrienne chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Still giggling at the boys and their big brother visit.
| AllusionToAnIllusion chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
First of all, chapters most definitely do NOT need to be shorter. I am a big fan of long chapters.
Second of all, I really like this. It's going to be seriously interesting. Plus, I like that Beckett's decided to chase him in a way. It's not Castle running after Beckett, it's her coming to him. You don't see too many stories like that. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| suusje32 chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
loved the first chapter,thanks so much
| NoOrdinaryLines chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
OMG This was hilarious. Almost died laughing in the end.
Looking forward to more!