Reviews for iHate the Heartache
ScribblyDragon chapter 1 . 1/4
Gods, I'm crying now. You're such a good writer, I loved the style and the way that you switched between past and present was quite interesting. Basically, great fanfic! :)
gift of the gabz chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I was so sad. I knew she was dead and I thought okay then it won't be as bad but it didn't work that way I still felt my heart break and was like noooo, it can't be true. I love the fact that their daughter's name is Sammy although I can't help but wonder if that decision hurt Freddie more than he realised and whether Carly even truly understood what had happened between them. It was a great story and I was really glad I read it.
scribblesandridd chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I loved your story! I found it really touching, I love stories like that! :)
Cold Flame96 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Okay honestly, I knew from the minute the flashbacks happened, and from the tragedy genre, that Sam died. I guess I'm just really smart, or I just read waaaayyy too many fanfics. I loved it! The only thing I didn't like is...Carly. I actually feel bad for her. For some reason, many seddiers portray her to be this total bitch.

I personally think she's charming and adorable, and I'm glad that you keep her true to her character. But, I will say that I don't like Freddie marrying her. You made it seem in the story like she was just basically his back-up plan, and that kind of bothers me. Like, the only reason that he would ever marry her is if Sam was out of the picture, and that's not real love. Not at all. If Freddie was going to marry Carly, it should be because he actually loves her and not just a last resort. :(

Sorry. Had to get that out of my system, but other than that, I loved it! :)
AmaranteReikaChan chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Oh wow. I'm just... that was... seriously lost for words. It was beautifully written. Your characterisation is beyond believable, and quite honestly perfect. It was very emotionally evoking. I would tell which were my favourite and least favourite parts but I'm still in slight shock...

As soon as I read the part about his wife telling him to clean out the studio cause his brother in law needed it I suddenly found myself hoping Sam was dead. Purely because I couldn't imagine Freddie being married to Carly if Sam was still alive, is that bad?

But I didn't realise how painful it would be to actually read her dying.

As depressing as this was I loved it. Poor Freddie. Now excuse me while I go cry in the corner.

I think I'm going to have to go watch iOMG or something to recover from my heartbreak... :)
LeahLovesHP chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
This is SUCH a beautiful story! It kind of reminds me of A Little Fall of Rain from Les Miserables, during Eponines death, she loves Marius who loves Cosette. I don't know if you know Les Miserables, but it always seemed like Sam is Eponine, Freddie is Marius, and Carly is Cosette. But this story NEVER fails to reduce me to tears!
VanillaMeBad chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Honestly? It was one of the best oneshots I've ever read. It was written so well, and I was in tears by the end. You really got the emotions perfect when Sam is in the crash and...it was just an amazing fic :)
xxxBayonettaHolic chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Wow...Made me cry so hard xD...Go Seddie! only part i didn't like..was the fact that Freddie ended up with Carly...still sweet how he had his little girl named after Sam ( from what i can infer).
BoredAsHeck chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
I absolutely loved the story :)

Everything was tied together well, and i really like the way you write.

The emotion was done amazingly, and the end had me in tears.

Great one-shot!
geegeeb chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Well, I thought it was fantastic. It was very well written, and it also made me cry like a baby. I love angsty five for some reason. The only thing I probably didn't like was that Carly and Freddie were married. But I loved it anyway.
seddieseddiebyebye chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Back in ten, going to buy another three boxes of tissues. This was so incredibly sad but really good!
jessicalove24 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Excuse Mee Whilee iContinuee To Bawl My Eyes Out/3
Seddiepopstar chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I thought it was SO good, but so, SO sad. It well-written, nice and long, and nobody was occ. It was interesting how you kinda made Freddie a little weak, strength-wise, cuz most stories these days describe him as super strong and muscley. One of my Twitter friends, SeddieLUV, reccomended it to me. When I started reading, I was like, "Oh c'mon, THIS is what made her sob?" but as I went on, I'm was like, "Okay, this is getting sad..." and by the end I was in tears! Great work :)
Nindira chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
This was a really good story, the emotions and lines were spot on, and though we could tell were the story was going you unveil it extremely well. amazing job
youarethelight chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Oh god, that was just... heartbreaking yet so... beautiful. It was written so well. I'm not good with depressing fics but geez it was so good. That final line had me blubbering just a bit. Amazing :D
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