Reviews for Sennin of the Four Nations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter and you trolled so hard on the almost lemon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great so naruto only trying show aang that war is cruel but that how it always that way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahhh... thanks for update I like it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. Can't wait for more. This the main villain like Susake or something like that? Ot is it a Avatar based villain? Will Katara join Naruto's family? Good luck and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello my name is Darrius and i want you to please continue updating your fanfiction it's getting better and better now that i can't wait till you update it so please continue updating your fanfiction please and thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome I'm glad it looks like Ty Lee will get some screen time, she hasn't had much in this story so far and she's one of my favorites from the show. Also that guy has no idea what he's getting into, Naruto will destroy him lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, you made Naruto compleatly inrecognizable in this story. I understand that FanFiction allows you to write characters in whatever way you want but when you change a character (especially if it's the protagonist) so much, that people don't recognize it, some might feel like the fanfic is just a cheap knockoff from the original franchise. Now I know that pretty much all the fanfictions out there are entirely different from their original franchises but I feel that where you are trying to make Naruto seem like the one we all know and love ( boisterous, happy, goofy,) he just comes out as lustfull and sexual. I'm not trying to flame you it's just a friendly opnion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tapped the fire nation and earth nation booty. 'Get the booty' accomplishment complicated, Reward: Pirate theme. I look forward to the expression Ozai makes when Naruto deals with the guy sent to take Azula. It'll be so nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope Naruto owns the pompous ass who Ozai picked. Just saying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL so Narutos great grand daughter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! The way you carefully developed azula's character was detailed and very good. The philosophies that naruto is depicted as saying really intrigue me, and it made me question the avatar universe even more. The way you describe things make quite a lot of sense. I find it especially true that all it takes is one power crazed man in the country to act as a catalyst in an all out war between nations. I also love how you put the things that naruto says very realistically. Can we have some Ty Lee development next please? I feel she has been a little underdeveloped so far. And with Mai questioning her feelings. Even though she and naruto kissed, does this actually solidify her place in the harem? Or would she end up with zuko like in canon? Would appreciate some answers :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() *runs head* hm, so curious this Hisoka figure is. I'd almost think it was Naruto in disguise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn I can already tell that I'm going to hate the guy that is helping Sang and yaaay naruto and mai finally kissed lol been waiting a while for that now just gotta wait for Ty Lee can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate that man who is that guy... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah I already don't trust that guy who's helping Aang n company. But right now he's their only hope. Also man Naruto has it good now 4 girls with him not including June ;) |