Reviews for Fear
ToManyLetters chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
The fear of fog is definitely an irrational fear, for sure. Very, very intriguing and well-written story. I love that neither dialogue nor narration seems too much, as though the two have come to an agreement to work in harmony, one with the other. Nice.

sweeternity chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Really good! I am pleased with the results. Thank you for finishing! You are first! We'll see the other stories and then I'll begin the judging!
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
love the one shot keep up the good work thank you