|Reviews for Portrait of a Wedding on Parchment|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
I really like the idea, though I think perhaps the fic is bit too wordy—by explaining every nuance, you may actually take away from the feel of the story. I think there is quite a lot of unnecessary detail and rumination—explaining all of Narcissa’s actions and feelings can be a bit patronizing to most readers. It’s better to have fewer words and more actions, and let the reader read in between the lines as opposed to writing in those lines to aid understanding. I know from personal experience how easy it is to get attached to words already written and thus be reluctant to edit anything out, but perhaps you should consider it?
I can be a bit wordy myself, so maybe that’s why I immediately notice that…
| Tempestt Londyn chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
| Il'Diko chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
I quite like this Narcissa. I loved how you have written her background, beeing an artist suits her. I also loved the bond she had with her sisters. Nicely done!