Reviews for Fathers and Sons: Edward
wi 1999 chapter 7 . 2/13/2017
i love this story and i would lije to read more in the week of tears story cause it was amazing please write more
Guest chapter 7 . 7/14/2016
An intriguing, entertaining read. 11/10
Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 7 . 9/16/2015
Great story, love Carisle back story
Guest chapter 5 . 5/31/2015
Hey Lucy, your style is rad! How long have you been wearing your pink bow hair tie?
My dad says I was born with a bow tie in my hair. Pink is my favorite color and bow hair ties are super cute so yeah! I've been wearing them since I was a baby.

We know you love animals. Do you have any pets?
I have a tabby cat called Maisie and my sister Molly has a Siberian one called Shrimp.

I was born in the city of Los Angeles in a shabby flat with my mom and dad and two fat cats called Shrimp and Power. My mum was notorious for spoiling her kittens with treats. I was introduced to video games by my mum when I was really really little, and ever since I was obsessed. My parents weren't well off so my mum managed a job at a 7-11 while my dad was a construction worker. One day he got injured so he got to take a break from his job. That was when my parents and I spent some of our best family times together, playing video games
Anoymous chapter 6 . 3/4/2015
I dont like this chapter at all. Carlisle receiving the strap really really really disgust me. I am frustrated!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/4/2015
I dont like how Carlisle got whipped. He is my favorite character and this makes me feel sad. He never got whip in his life which is not true. He is innocent!
Keshan Gibson chapter 5 . 3/3/2015
Edward said he was very sorry from his heart! Carlisle should have hug him and let him go. I think Rosalie would fight Bella since she is always jealous of her!
Spawn chapter 7 . 10/7/2014
Poor Ariana. Carlisle's father was a bastard. Edward needed to understand that his father knew what was best and he deserved respect. Running off was stupid. I hate the guilt Carlisle carries for something that was out of his control. Good job. Thanks for sharing.
cjsar01 chapter 5 . 3/24/2014
This was pretty nice. (Can't sleep. My parents are...ya...:-/..) I'll be reading your stories for the rest of the night.:-P
I'll sign in tomorrow and fav this story.
SNHfvr chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
Of course another awesome story! I don't know if I can stomach reading Carlisle's story, but I will try. Truth is, I have not read the twilight books yet. I am hoping my husband will buy them for me for xmas, we will see. Thank you for the great read, I enjoyed reading Edward and Carlisle's relationship. I always wondered what it was like for the two of them in the beginning and I wondered what Carlisle's life was as a vampire and how old he was and so forth. Thanks again! well onto the next story :-)
AFgurl chapter 7 . 7/25/2013
Aaawwwww! So CUTE! You are REALLY good at this! PS You have next to no spelling or grammar mistakes. Way to go:)!
rubyblue100 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Oh Edward just one more day and Carlisle would have taken you out It was clear from the conversation that Carlisle really was at the end of his tether and Edward is a smart boy he should have taken the hint.

I feel very protective over your Carlisle in this story as he seems so unsure of himself as a Father. Or maybe he just seems more vulnerable without Esme. I liked how the older *well younger doctor, but you know what I mean* gave Carlisle some good advice and it was clear that he cared for the young doctor with such burdens and nobody to share it with. *sob*

My favourite was the last part where Edward is furious that he is being stopped from fighting and I was thinking *Oh dear, run Edward run...*

Shame Edward cannot speak Italian or he may have got a hint of what is to come. Then again probably best not to worry him unesecarrily. Eeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkk - nervouse for both of them as it will be the first time.
ActressCeCe chapter 7 . 5/27/2013
I can't wait to read the other stories!
ActressCeCe chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
Poor carlisle, he's just beating himself up. Great story!
crotia chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Strange, When I read twilight I have never thought about how Carlisle would punish the vampire teens and if they ever would do something to earn that so it feels a little strange to read this but somewhere it is a logical thing. I liked this first chapter. wonder how I'll like the rest
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