Reviews for The Pelican & the Gulls
fancyacupofsanjitea chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Lysander! Hug her! :( I feel for her. You write angst really well.
ZeBarmyBookworm chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
That was depressing. Oh, Vic. She is so angsty. This one's nice.
lowi chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
mew, this was so sad... :( but nevertheless beautifully written! Your characterisation of Vic was really brilliant!

It was amazing mew, your writing is so good!
Morghen chapter 1 . 6/26/2011

This is really sad, mew! The emotions in it were so strong.

I really liked it, though. I could feel Victoire's pain and really relate to the fact that she couldn't tell Lysander how she felt. It's not easy... You described it vividly and it was easy to relate with her.

This one was a lot different than your others 'cause you added her other friends and not just Lysander. The comparison with the pelican and the gulls was really nice, too. It showed how different she felt she was from her other friends.

I hope Victoire and Lysander have a happy ending, though.


jojor99 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
I'm not going to say a lot here except - interesting!

Nice one.