|Reviews for Contender|
| lowi chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
mew, your xmen fics are amazing! I LOVED this!
You write so good, it's epic, I don't know how I should explain this, it was so brilliant, I'll stop now.
| controlled climb chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Oh poor Charles! Seeing (and I suppose feeling) Erik kiss Raven like that! Gods, that would’ve been awful. I loved Charles’s hesitance in the first few paragraphs and Erik’s bluntness and “cut to the chase” attitude was honestly all things good in life.
I liked the way you split the story up in sections. That definitely made it easy to follow. Plus, it means you didn’t have awful space-filling paragraphs to pass time and change scene.
Moira’s understanding in the last section threw me for a spin, admittedly. But I did like how eager and anxious Charles was to make sure that Erik was safe – very sweet, that was.
And even though you didn’t end at the end of the movie and the story was rather fast-paced, I loved reading it and the ending was, in my opinion, a fantastic place to end it.
Great piece, Mew (:
| Duriansoya chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Did I tell you how much I love this one-shot? because this was fairly amazing!
I love the interaction between Charles and Erik. heh.