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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not a Faberry shipper. But I have to say, I really, really enjoyed this story. The way you portrayed Quinn and Rachel's love for each other was very good, as well as the very heartbreaking Quinn arc you have illustrated in this story. And the ending was also awesome. I like how everything is coming around full circle, although I do hope that Quinn actively makes an effort to not fall down the trap of depression and alcoholism again. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want more omg |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the story! Xoxo |
![]() ![]() okay, finally back to a chapter where they are happily together without me crying! |
![]() ![]() Can I just give you a hug? |
![]() ![]() Hhhhhh Q&R, their reactions are priceless hhhhhIMAO |
![]() ![]() wow I can’t believe I just found this story! It is amazing, and I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was such a incredible ride though I really wished they could do something about her own fate, the concept of having your destiny settled on a stone and you won't be able to change anything is so scary especially in their case when both already had deep feelings for one another. The fact that they couldn't prevent Quinn to go through all that shit is so fucking horrible idk it's really depressing. It left a bittersweet feeling tbh my heart ached for them even tho i know they're gonna be happy in the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story after reading it and never reviewing. I never finished it but, I could honestly say this story has my heart 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a little bit confused about these children's birth. Alice says she's the only one that's Quinn's, then says the rest are Rachels, yet Quinn is the one that gave birth to them...so is this some kind of surrogate thing? Like she gave birth to them but it was Rachels eggs. P. wanted to let you know, that this story is Head Canon for me (currently re-reading it). It is certainly epic and so well made that it can't be anything less. It is wonderful and in consequence so are you. P.s.s. Looking forward to re-reading the zombie one as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're evil. Just absolutely evil. Also you suck at humor. I swear, this is hurt/comfort, not humor. I just hate this story so much. I love it, but... I want a happy ending. I want them to go back in time and remember. I hate that they're going through everything. All of the pain and suffering. I want another universe where Rachel and Quinn come back with their memories, and I just... FUUUCK, these feels right now. This is worse than reading a story where they deal with everything the first time. This is like purgatory or a curse, doomed to repeat mistakes over and over again. I want an alternate time line. Where they. Fuck I'm crying. This was a great and wonderful story, but right now I hate that you wrote it. I just can't anymore. I'm going to check the sequel quick, if you've written it. But I'm terrified that it will be less of a sequel and more of a prequel. That Quinn will suffer. Recover, certainly, but I don't. I can't think about them going through all of that. Unless it's somehow a fluffy AU fanfic of this fanfic, I can't read it. This isn't like the story, "The Silence of a Kiss", where Rachel is going deaf. That story made me cry my heart out, but like. It wasn't as painful as it was reading this story. You said you were partially Buddhist, but all I can think about is the concept of reincarnation and karma. But like. This is like if Rachel and Quinn were constantlt reincarnated back into their lives. Their karma stayed the same, and there was no escape. Knowing that they find happiness doesn't change the nightmare. I'm not religious, so maybe I'm wrong on this concept, but still... I just keep think about this and it's getting worse and worse the more I do. So I'm going to stop here. And you are a really good author, and I don't really hate you. Sorry if this review comes off as rude or something, I'm just super emotional after finishing this story. |
![]() ![]() I'm re-reading this now after many years, and I love it just as much as I did. This chapter was always one of my favorites and now I remember why. Those first interactions are just so good! We had the reveal that we suspected/hoped for since the beginning: that Rachel and Quinn were indeed married in the future. And the one on ones were amazing: Quinn telling Rachel that she was sorry for how she acted, and then the entire sequence with the two Quinns was just fantastic. That great insight into their characters is what made this fic one of the greats of the Faberry fandom. And what halcyon days those were! There will never be another Camelot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's such an interesting story that I want to know about their kids too. Will Carmen ever tone down the self-love and self-absorption? Will Alice feel like she's more than a grudging tribute to Quinn's genes? Will Alice and Nicole end up together somewhere far down the line? Morgan is so protective and stalwart on behalf of his family, love the young man. And Alex, anyone whose nickname is Puppy is alright in my book. I didn't forget little Shannon because she's a sweetheart. I wish all of them the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've loved several moments where one of the characters said or did something that was spot on perfect. One was in a previous chapter when Morgan was recounting how he was named but then revealed his uncertainty over the story's veracity because he lives with two sarcastic women who are willing to maintain fake stories for years just to mess with their children's minds. Then in this chapter when Brit said both Brits were trying to finagle a foursome with the Santanas-that was awesome and hilarious! I'm glad that Judy recognized young Quinn and I'm wondering if the future will be changed from what we see...I hope not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was excited to start reading this because I've read a couple of your other stories and enjoyed them much. I REALLY like bringing two people from the present into the future to observe their entirely surprising (gobsmacking!) relationship, I've only read and seen movies where one person is discovering their future. It's fun! Thanks for sharing. |