|Reviews for Inversion|
| MyRandomName chapter 11 . 9/15/2013
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 2 . 8/30/2013
the core thing is also the best idea i can give
| tmd126 chapter 11 . 8/26/2013
I would really enjoy seeing more of this story, if you have any plans to finish it.
| Beyogi chapter 11 . 7/2/2013
Interesting story, I'd like to read more about this.
Thank you for writing,
| devo342 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Awaome but please continue
| TheJoe241 chapter 11 . 5/25/2013
I know you have heard this many times but please carry on this story.
| Smierc chapter 11 . 5/23/2013
The concept is interesting. The writing is excellent.
The actors are assembled, but the story remains unfinished.
What a shame.
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/19/2013
| undeadyeti chapter 11 . 4/20/2013
You have turned shepard into Hoenheim congrats
| Grosstoad chapter 11 . 11/10/2012
The premise is interesting. Kinda like Mashadar's Mass Effect: Iron Rebirth, but ramped up to the eleven.
The writing's solid, just the chapters are a tad short. And kind of long in between?
Hard to judge more since it's practically still in the re-introduction stage.
Will be waiting for more chapters.
| Everettspartisan chapter 11 . 10/26/2012
Hope you continue the fic - well written and generally entertaining.
| Aeldrichspork chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
this is awesome. not because it's the only Reaper!Shepard I've seen yet, but because despite the ease which this could be a stompfic (LAWL Sheperd now 1.5km dreaddy what munches on fleets for brekkers LALALW) or an incredibly depressing darkfic (REAPERS WIN THE END GAME OVER INSERT COIN/"I am Reaper!Shep, woe is me because I've been at it several millennia and still can't stop the pointless slaughter, mope angst whine"/etc,)
it's well-written, well-characterized, and contains only the level of Sueinsness that Shepard has in-canon, and engages the reader by the first chapter-something that is all-too-rare in fanfics.
further, the premise is such that I can't read two paragraphs without saying "No, Jon, you ARE the reapers. and then Jon was a Reaper.", making amused noises, and causing further impact damage to my keyboard via headdesk.
I await the further adventures of The Shepard of the Ungrateful Masses (which is now my official 'long and slightly pretentious/egotistical name' for Reaper!shep.) with eager appendages.
| silentmarine chapter 11 . 8/23/2012
Hello, anyone out there? (Bumping the story in hopes of updates)
I really like the concept you are taking here. Shepard as a Reaper could cause a unique experience within the story. I hope you can keep this story going.
This idea is kind of played with in the Mass Effect 3 ending. I also saw other fanfics play with this idea after Mass Effect 3.
| Alec McDowell chapter 11 . 8/14/2012
This is giving me the same feelings as Transformers fic where Sam is made into a robot. I love it. Shepard seems to be mostly in shock as to his circumstances right now and really you can't blame him but I love that he's buckling down and continuing with his mission. Ashley is actually a great choice to go after first, love issues aside. She's not one to be taken in easily by someone bullshitting her and if she can prove she's not been indoctrinated then she'll be perfect at recruiting for the team. Hope to see more of this soon.
| Kane chapter 11 . 8/6/2012
You know it would be kind of nice of you if you were to continue this brain child of yours and while you are at it why don't you get a bit more infos about the Quarian characters you mentioned in this chapter, well aside from Tali and Kal Regar(did I pronounce his name right?) and how they'll react to Reaper!Shepard.