|Reviews for Elsewhere, but not Elsewhen|
| lotr195 chapter 25 . 3/9
i really hope you finish this one day
its such a good story, and i actually really like the voldy from harrys world.
| Ryuus2 chapter 25 . 3/7
This story is addicting. The first chapter is weird, and the last couple chapters really need better transitions when you're switching between universes, but other than that this story is just incredible. I have a rule that says I won't stay up past two, maybe three, in the morning on days that I have work: I was up until five, got up early to continue reading, was almost late to work, and couldn't find enough things at work to distract me from wanting to come home and finish this story. That is how good this story is.
Seeing Harry actually getting help with his Survivors Guilt, PTSD, et all is very comforting for some reason. Fate took a shit on him then set it on fire, but was at least nice enough to drop him on the doorstep of the one group of people that could probably put him back together, the right way this time. Lily and Sirius are definitely making some headway, and Hermione, Rachel, Luna, and Azalea are certainly helping to keep him grounded. And Sunstripe (I so want to shout 'Eulalia!' right now) seems to be slowly figuring out how to approach his twin.
Sane!Riddle is kinda creepy, especially with him turning back into his old human self for no explained reason. Actually, I think its the slow transformation that is creepier than the sanity. And Hermione's brief explanation that makes it sound like he's turning into a Slythern!Harry is not helping reduce the creep factor.
I really like Rachel and Azalea. Rachel is a completely unique idea as far as I know, and her character and history are very well constructed and executed. On a similar note, Azalea is something I've never seen in Harry's various fictional sisters: normalcy. She's just a nice young girl who treats her annoying older brother like an annoying older brother should be tread, and her nice but broken new brother with the humanity and kindness he deserves.
If I had to guess, I'd say there are no more than 5-to-10 chapters, including epilogues, left in this story. All that's left are Nagini and possibly (but unlikely) Rachel, and Voldemort himself, and with the planned invasion on Halloween that is not so secret as the Death Eaters think, this could all be over with a stupidly short time. All you'd need to do is fill the room with Aurors or Fiendfire to capture/kill the grunts, and leave Voldemort to Dumbledore to finish off. Then it's simply a matter of twisting events to allow for the prophecy, or a well-placed speech about how prophecies are bull after ignoring it, and you can wrap up things in the present and move on to the 'BLANK years later' part.
Interesting note: this is the 666 review on this story. I really hope that isn't some kind of bad omen for either of us.
Keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/28
excited for the next chapter!
| Waywardneko chapter 25 . 2/18
This is a fabulous story! I wish you would continue it!
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/26
I was also laughing the whole time. it really creeped my family out.
| saint21 chapter 23 . 1/27
Does Sunstripe has the cloak? And does he know what it is?
| Karis Hotmail chapter 16 . 1/25
1] its atomic batterys
1a] the idea of a Jet Turbine powered car, could _ONLY_ come out of the 1960s
2] all 'regular' authors pause occationally, and so long as you are not like robert Jordan, I cant see anyone should have an issue with it (RJ is known for taking decades between books)
| Anon chapter 25 . 1/25
PLease finish as I enjoy your original twists on the story.
| Guest chapter 14 . 1/24
I would suggest Mr Stripes
| Bad Wolf Jen chapter 25 . 1/20
This is a great story. And I hope you update soon.
| acrimony1029341 chapter 25 . 1/14
While this will arrive late I offer you my condolences for your aunt. Also this is an excellent story please update soon!
| chain.reader chapter 25 . 12/1/2013
| Goddess of the Black Rose chapter 25 . 11/17/2013
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| mageofmyth chapter 25 . 11/14/2013
I just found this and really liked it. I do hope that we find out what the old Dumbledore was up to, and see him fall. Tom in the old world seems like he would actually be better for the wizarding world, unlike the LV in the new world which would not.
| esran chapter 9 . 11/7/2013
Why did you make Lucios gay?