|Reviews for Retrace|
| Tempesta del Cielo chapter 5 . 2/8
Please update! It's so humorous! I love the way Minato and Naruto being brothers and Rouran? Hah! I just watched that movie yesterday!
| fullmoondragon chapter 5 . 12/9/2013
please update awesome story by the way I tried to find more storys like this but I cant so pleeeease update ppppppppppplllleeeeaaaassssseeeeee
| Kin no Tatsu chapter 5 . 11/18/2013
Keep writing! Pleeeaaaassseee! You can't quit when you've just brought Kushina in! I'll givez you cyber-cookies! I'd give you real ones, but I can't really do that...
| Kin no Tatsu chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Great story! The only little thing that bothers me is you saying "twin little brother." Technically, he'd either be Minato's twin OR his little brother. I guess the only reason I'm bothered by this is because I'm a twin. I'm just nit-picky like that and can sometimes turn into a grammar nazi, so...
Anywho, this story is awesome! I'm completely with you about being disappointed with the ending of the movie. Although, I was more like screaming-at-the-computer-crying-hysterically disappointed. I hope you keep writing!
| Clarilyn chapter 5 . 9/24/2013
Next chappie! Next chappie!
| evakname chapter 5 . 9/23/2013
Thank u for the update :) i like this story. However, i think it needs some more profound thoughts and feelings, and some "heavy, deep" conversations between the family, and even friends. Not to mention the serious business about the not so bright future, which Naruto surely wants to change, so he have to talk about it with Sarutobi, Jiraiya (since he is an important figure in the "system") and Minato...at least. It seems to carefree and downright rushed (almost) with those easy, fast conversations, no significant inner pensiveness and stuff...sorry i just feel like this a bit. Maybe Naruto did all this on purpose since he must be a bit confused and frustrated, and takes a break distracting himself to gain time but the others seem to buy things a bit too fast and get used to easily without their thoughts mentioned... well dont get me wrong, i just had this feeling a bit... But i think u just gave him a break before the big things, right?
The family bonding needs those honest, bittersweet conversations and actions, i hope u will take care of that too. Of course the fun and awesomeness (jutsus and future facts) deserves a high place here too. I love the dropped jaws :D
But dont forget the very core of "the Naruto universe", the weight of the bonds and family. Let Naruto open up and be himself a bit (i personally hope for some show off too, since Naruto is not the moderate one to hold back, but naturally willing to put up an awesome, cool fight and shine bright with his jutsu arsenal :D for fun and all) .
Well, kinda thats all the directions it comes to my mind now about it... But well, its your story. Im eager to see where it goes. I hope i helped a little by mentioning the effects/sensations about it, which only another person, a random reader can observe. Overall this story earned a good place in my mind among the insane amount of ongoing ones i read. Keep up the good work :D
| ryuou chapter 5 . 7/26/2013
Very smooth writing, doesn't feel forced. Feels relatively plausible? Anyways great fic so far,
please continue soon.
| SunShineJ chapter 5 . 7/12/2013
i love it so much! asdfghjkl;
| ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
| emina15 chapter 5 . 5/26/2013
Hmmm...If I remember kakashi didn't have the sharingan in the mission to rouran...
| alyaa akira chapter 5 . 5/12/2013
I like the story. I see how u try to relate naruto with his parents. I love it! I hope u can update soon and i want to see naruto reaction toward his mother. Hehehe...
| TiffRedd1994 chapter 5 . 5/9/2013
This is great! keep it up!
| mimineil97 chapter 5 . 4/27/2013
Love your story so far! Update soon!
| luckycomet09 chapter 5 . 3/29/2013
Great start! You're taking quite an original time travel path and I must say it's pretty entertaining :)
Keep up the good work and please update soon!
PS The newest Naruto (coming out this April) looks spectacular!
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/28/2013
Luv ur story;) Update soon okay!