|Reviews for Running on Empty|
| dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
this is good
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Ooh, there's something so... Twilight Zone-esque about this fic, particularly with that twist (I loved said twist, for what it's worth).
That opening scene is just so powerful and horrifying, and the aftermath of what it did to Schrank is just so heartbreaking. You want to hug the guy, though he'd never accept said hug.
His interacting with the punks said a lot-it showed how much he has changed, how hardened his heart has become.
And the twist... just perfect. Don't want to give it away, but I loved the interaction there.
| pleasantvalley chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Amazing work. Loved the tragedy of it and the very creative twist at the end and once again I'm really impressed with how you are able to really flesh out the character of Schrank and show his more vulnerable side.