Reviews for Scary |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this! It’s nicely done!. |
![]() ![]() Amazing. Good stuff |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A cute jally smut fics do exist! I was worried i'd have to write one myself. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got a great way Sally could scare Jack... She could tell him she's pregnant! LOL good story BTW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() funny and cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() 0/0 That was way awesome and way hot! HOORAY FOR DISNEY LOGIC! ALL HAIL THE KING AND QUEEN OF THE PUMPKIN PATCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pffft, I love the ending of this. Go Sally! You show them you're scary! Poor Jack, he has no idea where this came from. You're not a bad author, you know. A lot of people have wrote lemons, many waaaay more graphic than this. This isn't weird either, I really wish there was more of these, actually. And you're right about one more thing: Never question the logic that is Disney. Good job on this, it was very entertaining. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, jack would never see sally the same way again. it seems like he thoroughly enjoyed that. trust me, this isn't too weird. it's a very decent fic to be honest. you contributed to sally's character that she is capable of having a dark side. hehe. and jack seems to like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe smut... really good smut... Jally smut... lovely :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel your pain when i write my GiroNatsu stories, (Human form with a non-human form). I'm still worried ill get a review filled with judgment. I feel that this was a rather good story of jack and sally havin some fun, i loved the idea of sally taking control this time *giggle*. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is easily one of my favorite Nightmare stories...one that I read over and over again. I love everything about it, especially Sally's creativity. She earns the title of Pumpkin Queen with this! :D Thank you for sharing this story with the rest of us! You're the best! Vy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my. I absolutely LOVED the amount of control Sally had with this. It's nice to see her in a more demanding position than her usual meek self. Wonderful job! Thanxs! :) :p ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() somehow i always like the idea of the female in control and the men at thier will. *grins evilly* IDK, it just WORKS... *blush* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely Amazing I love how Sally is in the story |