Reviews for Gravity Series 2: Sin & Innocence
TATE Forever101 chapter 1 . 5/14/2018
Just started this one and I’m in LOVE (once again haha). I’m trying to get caught up on this series lol. I’m excited to see what this one holds! And Bethy is absolutely adorable!
Spikelinegod chapter 18 . 3/29/2018
Ok great story I love everything...but I need to say as a Canadian if anyone called the RCMP on that cabin this plot line would be complete. Just the weapons alone would get the group arrested and if they killed a single RCMP officer then the Canadian military would step in. We don't have the same weapon and property Liberty's as the USA. Okay reentering my suspension of disbelief for the next chapter.
Lizzard43 chapter 12 . 3/20/2018
I honestly think that Kenny was saying that crap to Bella just to piss Edward off. Kenny knows he is going to be worked over and tortured but if he could rule up Edward enough maybe he figured that was a way to get a quick death.
Lizzard43 chapter 7 . 3/19/2018
I know this is fiction but this is starting to bother me. If Gravity is located in Forks, Washington then driving to San Francisco would take over 8 hours. I wish that driving was that easy and fast. :-)

I used to drive from Los Angeles to Sacramento all the time to visit family. It would take us 6 to 7 hrs but that was us driving the speed limit. Had to with little ones in the car. Anyway, I love the story and the action but my brain did a little tilt when the traveling came into play.
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 26 . 1/26/2018
EXCELLENT!

Perfect ending for our perfect family...extended and all!

Can't wait to continue on!

XOXO
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 24 . 1/25/2018
So glad Edward killed that biotch!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 23 . 1/21/2018
So glad he got a star to honor Sam :)
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 20 . 1/21/2018
Thank you, Sam. :(
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 15 . 1/21/2018
I KNEW that was coming. When Bella kept saying she was tired all the time...SSQQQQUUEEEE!
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 12 . 1/21/2018
Outdoor sex is the best!

Now on to see "the boss"! Bwahahahahaha!
illyrianbaby chapter 20 . 1/15/2018
Omg I’m crying
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 8 . 1/14/2018
I thought it was so sweet the way Abby would look to Bethy before she made any moves; like when Mickey introduced herself and was going to take her from Edward.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2018
who the heck is that lady from the elevator
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 1 . 1/7/2018
I JUST finished Blood and Glory and couldn't wait to start this one. I sssoooo want to be on track for the one you are currently writing!
b3j02 chapter 26 . 12/19/2017
This is great! I am so glad there is more to the story.
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