Reviews for what if?
PepTalkGurl101 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
not a big cal/morgan fan but this is good for ur 1st fanfic! keep up the good work!
AnonymousNerd chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Much better! I'm so glad you added more to this first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more.
bowielegacy chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
This is a really great idea for a story, but one thing I would recommend is grammar. I found it kinda hard to follow along what was going on. I'm not sure exactly what happened. But, again, good story and good core. With minor grammar fixations, it could be really great!

- BowieLegacy