Reviews for Sugar to My Salt
DragonGirl chapter 6 . 5/18
Hey, I really like this story and I normally don't read mpreg - so well done! :)
Just one thing, I don't know if anyone mentioned it already but I'm German and when you say " He murmured 'Ich liebe dich', 'Bitte aufwachen', 'Wir brauchen Sie'… 'Ich brauche dich'." in chapter 6 it's pretty acurate but 'Bitte wach auf' and 'Wir brauchen dich' would be better. Just so you know. Lots of love from me!
JulianneL chapter 6 . 1/12/2014
Whew! Sigh of relief. My heart near stopped when Charles died. Everything that could have gone wrong, did go wrong. Turbulent times indeed.
Spock Prime chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
SLASHMONSTER eatin yo boys up chapter 2 . 9/8/2012
-_- -sighs-
SLASHMONSTER eatin yo boys up chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Ha! i have to do that the next time i get the stomach flu "mother forgive me" all over her bed :D so evil me!... i likes it im gonna continue reading :D i loves cherick for the simple fact that the mpregs are so cute
hikary22 chapter 6 . 8/5/2012
This is too heartwarming and and.. no words to describe it. i totally thought charles died in the previous chapter, but this last chapter is such a relief, and have a very good ending to it. n i really like the name 'Huette'.
kyuuka yayoi chapter 7 . 6/2/2012
a really lovely story... some part bitter, most part sweet... I really loved it... I really love the twins;-)
kumagorox3 chapter 7 . 3/1/2012
That was an amazing story! It was beautifully written and I'm just so glad Charles stayed through to see his two adorable children! I can't wait to see Galen and Huette grow up. I wonder what Galen's power is. I'm going to read the sequel now!
nequam-tenshi chapter 7 . 11/20/2011
A wonderful story. I nearly cried when Charles finally woke up!
SapphireMoonlight24 chapter 7 . 11/15/2011
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I loved it so much!

You're so amazing at portraying emotion through the characters.

You're fantastic! So fantastic, I can't even.

dirtygirl42 chapter 7 . 11/3/2011
Mpreg is one of my favorite dirty little secrets and you've pulled it off in this fic magnificently. I loved the pacing of the plot and the interactions of the characters - great work!
Aniagreen chapter 7 . 8/28/2011

I read all his fiction in one night, or early morning to be exact!

I loved every piece of fiction, the foundation had terioa pregnancy. I think the two together so beautiful. They would make great parents, Charles Mom and Erik Dad.

I have this odd couple, Hank and Alex.

Each scene is perfect and I was sorry when Charles was shot and still had babies. I would not have controlled, would have killed everyone.

I like how they met, makes me wonder how they got close, they created a friendship and then love. I would appreciate if you tell me.

I loved the twins. What is the power of the boy?


Sorry my English is not my native language.
suselinde chapter 7 . 7/24/2011
Thank you for your lovely story! I really liked it! Epilogue was great, too! I would love to read more XMFC from you :)
Rose chapter 7 . 7/23/2011
First of all when I was reading chapter six and I saw my name and comment, I was like :O omg you read my review and commented. I was so happy.

Seccond I loved the ending, it so good, happy ending are always good. I thought it was really really good, I am no longer sad :)

and last I would like to thank you for writing such an amazing fanfiction about my fave couple and fandom. Your fanfiction was so good I waited in anticipation for the next chapters. You are really really amazingly great at writing. Don't stop.

Your are amazing xxx rose :D
LadyGhai chapter 7 . 7/23/2011
This is really the ending XD haha a very beautiful story!
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