Reviews for Bitter
Yinzer Reader chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Fun read. Thank you
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
You are very good at the no smut also! This was so lovely. I am really enjoying ur one shots. I like how jasper never gave up on edward. How sweet. Loved it! Melissa
simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
You are very good at the no smut also! This was so lovely. I am really enjoying ur one shots. I like how jasper never gave up on edward. How sweet. Loved it! Melissa
sessahhh chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Wow. This made my heart all clenchy. I'm glad there was a happy at the end, it would have been a real bummer if he never let him back in again. Great, great job. You really made me want for Edward to get his friend back.
dtav chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Great job for Jen's birthday! I loved your Edward in this, and I'm glad he and Jasper found their way back to each other.
Mrs. Agget chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Wow! This was so so good!

Penny
Grizzo chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Yeah. Thank goodnes for Jasper's resiliance. Got through that thick skull. Great story...gr
OCDJen chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Thank you so much!

I loved this. You nearly made me cry with it, haha!

Hope you're feeling better, babe, and thank you very much!

love ya
cocoalvin chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
So sweet. Thanks for sharing you lovely birthday gift for Jen.

Happy Bday Jen if you happen to read this. ;)
slowpoke15hi5 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
This was adorable- just what I needed to relax tonight. Thank you :)

I particularly love the voice you wrote in for this. Edward was so believable and very different from your other Edward's. I loved how the reader was confused with him at first but the more awake he became, the more enlightened the reader became.

I never would have guessed you were sick if you didn't say anything because the writing was fabulous dear. Thanks for sharing with the rest of us :D

-Laura

P.S. I miss talking to you online :( I'll try to get on twitter more often to say hi.
minlin chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Aww, started out so sad, but ended so sweetly.
isacz chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
love ittt! the last sentence was really cute.
bbbluez chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Awww, sweet!
DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Lovely...I was happy that Jasper was able to break through to him.
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
That was sweet and lovely.
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