|Reviews for Insontis|
| MaryChapel chapter 59 . 3/22
This was amazing! Thank you for writing it. I found it very well written.
| DammitJim chapter 1 . 2/15
| Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 38 . 11/22/2014
I laughed so hard I literally cried. I have wet cheeks.
| kelly reiger chapter 59 . 9/23/2014
Loved this whole series. Read it in 2 days. Had to laugh in many areas. Loved the McCoy part about kid I swear I'm getting u a leash and later getting him one. Loved how you brought up several episodes. Loved amanda and sarek. And mccoy sendind puesdo grandparent holos loved so much of this really! !
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| LostCure chapter 59 . 8/6/2014
Love this whole story.
| MuggleCreator chapter 59 . 5/26/2014
I LOVED this story. Brilliant.
| WeirdLittleStories chapter 59 . 11/1/2013
Wow. Even your crack is more interesting and insightful than most! Kudos.
| WeirdLittleStories chapter 38 . 10/31/2013
We mostly know about Kirk's Academy years from what Gary Mitchell says during the second pilot, "Where No Man Has Gone Before." And I think the reason for the "stack of books with legs" comment and the "grim" comment is that at that point in the show's development, the creative team was still thinking about the star of the FIRST pilot. They didn't yet know what they had in William Shatner; they didn't yet know that he would not be the more internal, low-key kind of captain that Jeffrey Hunter had been but would instead be the charismatic, high-energy captain that Shatner turned out to be. So they were really writing those lines thinking of Captain PIKE. Once they got a load of Shatner, they wrote a Kirk that matched his personality better. I think that's the reason for the disconnect between what we know of Kirk's Academy years and what we see of him during his tenure as Captain of the Enterprise.
| Play-Your-Song chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Dear KCS, I love all your star trek fanfics, but this one is my favorite. I always loved the Spock/Kirk friendship, but here Spock & McCoy's friendship comes to the forefront, and it's just really good. I love it. Plus, Spock as a doting father is priceless.
| doctorjohnlock chapter 59 . 7/18/2013
I love this story so much! I'm so sad to see it come to an end. If you're still doing additional chapter suggestions, may I suggest perhaps normal-age Jim watching some security footage of Spock and McCoy with his toddler self? And/or Bones and Spock teaching baby!Jim how to walk? This fic is adorable and I hope you keep adding to it- and to the sequel. ;D
| sleipnirfenris chapter 28 . 7/8/2013
They tell us he reprogrammed the Maru in the movies xD
| sleipnirfenris chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
OMG. You are a genius!
| sleipnirfenris chapter 5 . 7/7/2013
| Phoebe chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
I love how Archer is having fits about this! :):):D
| a fellow writer 515 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013