|Reviews for Too Complicating|
| Dangerdude chapter 18 . 5/15
This chapter had soo much going onn.
Firstly, damn Dawn's mom lol. She should be the biggest contender for the mother of the year prize lmaoo.
And i was really impressed the way Ash handled that one particular part. As i was reading it, i felt ratger nervous. But Ash handled it in the best way podsible. Surprused that Kenny didn't resolve to violence tho.
And lastly, i couldn't help but to smile after seeing the romance part. It was so very cute and well written.
Wonderful story it has been. Only one more chater left tho sighhh
| Dangerdude chapter 17 . 5/15
Yay. A perfect chapter!
The chapter length was good so was the content. And wooohooo they r finally togrther xD
| Dangerdude chapter 15 . 5/14
Hmm i think it would've been much beter if more depth could be shown in Ash and Mistys relationship. Coz as a reader, i didn't even feel shocked that misty did that with tracey.
Also, it wouldve been much better for the story, if tracey was introduced earlier. This sudden introduction of a new character and galling love with a main character seemed a bit off to me :/
Chapter was good btw
| Dangerdude chapter 14 . 5/14
The chapter was fineeeee. A bit short, but it was totally alright
| Dangerdude chapter 13 . 5/14
Oh wow. Major writing style transformation xD
This chapter had so much detailing to everything omg! Really loved it and hehe really wasn't expecting them to get together so soon lmao
| Dangerdude chapter 11 . 5/12
OMG this chapter xD
I loved the twists and at the end, Ash got trolled Lmaoo.
And ooh. Tht nightmare part was really scary (0_0)
| Dangerdude chapter 10 . 5/12
I'm really hookes into this story. Really enjoying every bit of it. Imma read the next chapter now xD
| Dangerdude chapter 9 . 5/12
Wonderful backstories added to the main characters. It was well done.
And now all know where this story is headed ;P
| Dangerdude chapter 7 . 5/12
Kenny is such a jerk in this story lmao.
Anyway. So far, the focus of the story isn't on Ash. But I'm not complaining. I'm loving the story xD
| Dangerdude chapter 6 . 5/11
The characters of the story seem really OOC. Misty's suster certainly doesn't talk like that...
Keeping characters in check is a big lart of a story and hopefully the later chapters will fix this problem
And as for the chapter, it was gooood. Things have finally started getting complicating, which i really like~
| Dangerdude chapter 4 . 5/11
I really enjoyed reading that Drew and Dawn part. Some important life lessons right there!
Never change yourself to make somebody like you. And love your lover for how he/she is instead of forcing him/her to change.
Loved the chapter.
| Dangerdude chapter 3 . 5/11
Pokeshipping looks the main ship upto now. But I'm pretty sure things will change hehe
| Dangerdude chapter 2 . 5/10
It did feel rather rushed rbh. Hopefully it'll be better in the later chapters :/
And hmm. Clear pokeshipping hints there. Lets see how it goes xD
| Dangerdude chapter 1 . 5/10
Mhmm cool first chapter.
Other than the fact that May and Drew are a couple, I'm okay with everything lmao.
| percy zoe and artemis fan chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
I have a Bad Feeling about this