|Reviews for Keep Up|
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/10
I really loved this fan fiction! It's wrote really well. I thought there relationship started out kinda slow but the last few chapters make up for that! Really great fan fic! You should write more that are long like this one!
| Mo de Aries chapter 21 . 10/10/2016
Loved this fanfiction! XDD
You surely should do more fanfiction!
Thanks for the hard work!
| jackita chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
A very good start, caught my attention.
| MintMousse chapter 8 . 9/16/2016
very sappy and errr , childish, or more immature maybe. juvenile. i think i prefer the more mature kakairu fics, though its well written enough. and i dont mean the sexual content but the characterisations fyi. so much teen angst lol. cheers
| Ranni chapter 19 . 9/11/2016
Great new chapter. Hope to see more
| AriesDanger24 chapter 21 . 9/11/2016
Omg, this was so great~ you finally updated and finished it~~~~ I am so happy because you literally saved me because I was falling asleep when I had work to do, but your chapters are so amazing I became alive again...the power of great fan fiction is scary
| Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 5 . 3/2/2016
i like the flow of this
| Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 4 . 3/2/2016
this is good. it keeps my interest and makes me curious for more. You deserve more reviews
| Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
| Kitkatkatie64 chapter 18 . 12/10/2015
I know it has been a year and a half since you last updated the story, but i feel it is a shame not to finish it. You are so close to it being done, and it has been a pleasure to read it. So if you are still active on your account please post the final chapters. thank you for sharing your work. :)
| YoungScribe chapter 18 . 6/30/2015
You still alive? Just wondering because... you haven't updated since August of 2014. I just found your page and I think you're a really good writer. I'd like to read more. Anyway, please up date. I'd appreciate it.
| chocomiiillk13 chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
I really love all the aspects of this story. It's sweet and complex and wonderful. I can't wait till thr next chapter cause that was on heck of an ending for that last one.
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/6/2014
| AriesDanger24 chapter 18 . 8/15/2014
No Iruka! Don't think! Feel the moment seize it! I really hope Kakashi can make Iruka feel better! XD This is a great story! I love the way you write Majestic Moose *loves your username*
| c e n n a d e s u chapter 18 . 8/3/2014
Oh no! I hope Ruka-kun doesn't do anything drastic. :( I can feel the suspense building; everything is going too perfectly to not have something bad happen soon.
I can't wait for the next update
Also, in regards to like grammar mistakes and stuff, the main thing I notice is the misuse of 'to, and too'. Its throughout most of the chapters, so it would be hard to point them all out in a review. If you want help on which one to use when, feel free to message me! Amazing story, otherwise. -