Reviews for Keep Up
Guest chapter 21 . 1/10
I really loved this fan fiction! It's wrote really well. I thought there relationship started out kinda slow but the last few chapters make up for that! Really great fan fic! You should write more that are long like this one!
Mo de Aries chapter 21 . 10/10/2016
Hi there!
Loved this fanfiction! XDD
You surely should do more fanfiction!
Thanks for the hard work!
jackita chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
A very good start, caught my attention.
I like..!
MintMousse chapter 8 . 9/16/2016
very sappy and errr , childish, or more immature maybe. juvenile. i think i prefer the more mature kakairu fics, though its well written enough. and i dont mean the sexual content but the characterisations fyi. so much teen angst lol. cheers
Ranni chapter 19 . 9/11/2016
Great new chapter. Hope to see more
AriesDanger24 chapter 21 . 9/11/2016
Omg, this was so great~ you finally updated and finished it~~~~ I am so happy because you literally saved me because I was falling asleep when I had work to do, but your chapters are so amazing I became alive again...the power of great fan fiction is scary
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 5 . 3/2/2016
i like the flow of this
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 4 . 3/2/2016
this is good. it keeps my interest and makes me curious for more. You deserve more reviews
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Kitkatkatie64 chapter 18 . 12/10/2015
I know it has been a year and a half since you last updated the story, but i feel it is a shame not to finish it. You are so close to it being done, and it has been a pleasure to read it. So if you are still active on your account please post the final chapters. thank you for sharing your work. :)
YoungScribe chapter 18 . 6/30/2015
You still alive? Just wondering because... you haven't updated since August of 2014. I just found your page and I think you're a really good writer. I'd like to read more. Anyway, please up date. I'd appreciate it.
chocomiiillk13 chapter 18 . 12/26/2014
I really love all the aspects of this story. It's sweet and complex and wonderful. I can't wait till thr next chapter cause that was on heck of an ending for that last one.
Guest chapter 17 . 12/6/2014
AriesDanger24 chapter 18 . 8/15/2014
No Iruka! Don't think! Feel the moment seize it! I really hope Kakashi can make Iruka feel better! XD This is a great story! I love the way you write Majestic Moose *loves your username*

c e n n a d e s u chapter 18 . 8/3/2014
Oh no! I hope Ruka-kun doesn't do anything drastic. :( I can feel the suspense building; everything is going too perfectly to not have something bad happen soon.

I can't wait for the next update

Also, in regards to like grammar mistakes and stuff, the main thing I notice is the misuse of 'to, and too'. Its throughout most of the chapters, so it would be hard to point them all out in a review. If you want help on which one to use when, feel free to message me! Amazing story, otherwise. -
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